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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Deleted 89

    Heyyyyy Lumi. So sorry this is so late. I didn't actually forget about reviewing this (it's actually been nagging me at the back of my mind for literal months now ...

    Wed Jan 17, 2018 7:52 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction
    Re: The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4

    Hey there! I'm here as requested to review this, and first things first, since this is a later chapter of your novel, something that would be really helpful to drop-in ...

    Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:07 am

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: The Worry Child

    Hello there and sorry for the wait. I'm here to review your poem as requested! First things first, you've got a lot of alliteration going on in this, and as ...

    Sat Oct 21, 2017 11:42 pm

  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy
    Re: The Raven Heir - Part 3

    I AM BACK FOR ROUND THREE YESSSSSSS! First things first, I think the images is the way to go because it is smoother to read if you just want to ...

    Sat Oct 21, 2017 11:22 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Health
    Re: dear you

    Hey there, Kara. Since you reviewed me, I figured I'd return the favor, but I've been sitting here for a bit trying to figure out how to tackle this because ...

    Fri Oct 06, 2017 10:02 pm

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: Haunted

    Hello there and happy RevMo (even if I am a bit late to the reviewing party)! You have the honor of being my Fiftieth RevMo Review, as chosen by the ...

    Sun Oct 01, 2017 1:00 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 4.3

    And with this review, I'm all caught up and in need of one final thing to reach my fiftieth. Oh, Silver, how could you fail me so? ;.; (I'm joking, ...

    Sun Oct 01, 2017 12:46 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 4.2

    Well, now that the cavalry's arrived, clearly not all is well because there wouldn't be much of a plot if the now-quartet were successfully escorted back to the castle and ...

    Sun Oct 01, 2017 12:26 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 4.1 (Cornerstone)

    The Green Room is still empty. I am still lacking other things to review. And I'm still waiting for you to accept my friend request over Discord, so you know ...

    Sun Oct 01, 2017 12:08 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 3.4

    You know what time it is? Yup. It's "Kyll reviewed everything in the Green Room (again) and came back to assault you with more commentary" time. Also, I can't find ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 11:40 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture
    Re: Ave Deus

    The first thing I'm going to do, and I recommend you do the same, is respectfully toss @fortis's review out the nearest window and wash my hands of it while ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 11:23 pm

  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic
    Re: Emotional Things

    Hello there and happy RevMo (even if I am a bit late to the reviewing party)! I, a bold Knight of the Green Room , am here today to review ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 10:36 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 3.3

    Alrighty! This review will be short because this is the last one I can drop before I have to run around as an adult and do adult things like go ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 4:57 pm

  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual
    Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    This is interesting. I'm not sure if you intended this to or not, but this piece is on the edge of treading the line between prose and poetry, and I ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 4:22 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Chapter 3.2

    There is still nothing in the Green Room for me to review. *insert frowny face of despair here* Fortunately I still have you, but I've nine more reviews to go ...

    Sat Sep 30, 2017 4:01 pm

It is dangerous to be right in matters on which the established authorities are wrong.
— Voltaire