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  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Life Through the horses eyes.

    I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...

    Dec 6, 2010

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: As I Cantered.

    I took your advice, is that better?

    Dec 6, 2010


  • Looks really good, but it almost blinded me! It would be better if you also made it look real. It looks like a drawing. Well done though, did you edit ...

    Dec 2, 2010

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: As I Cantered.

    Ode to Texas Born; April 20th 2002, Died; Sept 11th 2009 As I Cantered As I cantered on Texas I felt so free Like a sailor would feel on the ...

    Nov 30, 2010


  • Defo The Little White Horse. I bought it because it looked and sounded ok in the store (It sounds childish, but its really complicated and adult) it had NOTHING to ...

    Nov 30, 2010

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Captain Jack Sparrow

    Omg love it, how did you do it? I think Jonnie Depp (Not sure how you spell his name) is a really good actor! i like the way he is ...

    Nov 30, 2010

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Heart

    Omg thats really nice! You're a really good artist! wish i could draw like that!

    Nov 30, 2010

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: Persephone's Daughter

    Wow cool, really liked it, had some real emotion behind it. I love greek mytholagy anyway, but this is going in my fave poems book.

    Nov 29, 2010


  • the Inkheart series. Cant beat it.

    Nov 29, 2010

  • Other Poetry
    Re: happy never after

    really good. Do you have any others?

    Nov 29, 2010

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Realized

    I liked it, but found it hard to stay with, I had to go back and read it again. I dont think it was very flowing, but better than i ...

    Nov 29, 2010

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Life Through the horses eyes.

    Hey, thanks for the advice, it has been changed! Umm Yeh, Sienna did do all this and yeh (Unfortunately) she is real. Its baced on her life, but it cant ...

    Nov 29, 2010


  • 18 Nice home When I finally got to the place I was heading to I felt SO relieved! Now I would get a drink, I hadn’t had one all day. ...

    Nov 29, 2010

  • Welcome Mat
    Re: Umm...New Here???

    I'm quite new here too, its really fun and easy! Books are my fave thing by far.... well that and Sienna my horse, of course! lol hey that rhymes!!! :D ...

    Nov 29, 2010


  • Thats cool! where did you find the photo? LOVIN IT!!!

    Nov 29, 2010


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