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JenGwen

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Life Through the horses eyes.

    I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...

    Mon Dec 06, 2010 7:43 pm

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: As I Cantered.

    I took your advice, is that better?

    Mon Dec 06, 2010 7:39 pm


  • Looks really good, but it almost blinded me! It would be better if you also made it look real. It looks like a drawing. Well done though, did you edit ...

    Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:21 pm

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: As I Cantered.

    Ode to Texas Born; April 20th 2002, Died; Sept 11th 2009 As I Cantered As I cantered on Texas I felt so free Like a sailor would feel on the ...

    Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:17 pm


  • Defo The Little White Horse. I bought it because it looked and sounded ok in the store (It sounds childish, but its really complicated and adult) it had NOTHING to ...

    Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:07 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Captain Jack Sparrow

    Omg love it, how did you do it? I think Jonnie Depp (Not sure how you spell his name) is a really good actor! i like the way he is ...

    Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:53 pm

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Heart

    Omg thats really nice! You're a really good artist! wish i could draw like that!

    Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:51 pm

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: Persephone's Daughter

    Wow cool, really liked it, had some real emotion behind it. I love greek mytholagy anyway, but this is going in my fave poems book.

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:15 pm


  • the Inkheart series. Cant beat it.

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:11 pm

  • Other Poetry
    Re: happy never after

    really good. Do you have any others?

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:09 pm

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Realized

    I liked it, but found it hard to stay with, I had to go back and read it again. I dont think it was very flowing, but better than i ...

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:04 pm

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Life Through the horses eyes.

    Hey, thanks for the advice, it has been changed! Umm Yeh, Sienna did do all this and yeh (Unfortunately) she is real. Its baced on her life, but it cant ...

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:52 pm


  • 18 Nice home When I finally got to the place I was heading to I felt SO relieved! Now I would get a drink, I hadn’t had one all day. ...

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:03 pm

  • Welcome Mat
    Re: Umm...New Here???

    I'm quite new here too, its really fun and easy! Books are my fave thing by far.... well that and Sienna my horse, of course! lol hey that rhymes!!! :D ...

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:59 pm


  • Thats cool! where did you find the photo? LOVIN IT!!!

    Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:07 pm


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