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Zacharias Drake

  • A short story's purpose (as you most likely well know and have shown) is to tell a compelling and memorable story in a *short* amount of time. In just over ...

    Nov 19, 2022

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: The Thunder

    Heyo, Liminality! I know I'm late to the party, but I found your piece here and liked it quite a bit, so I thought I'd give it a go! :D ...

    Jul 1, 2022

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: Writers block Piece?? I have no title :')

    Hey imahni, i really enjoyed your short here :D I haven't done reviews in a while, so of course feel free to pick and choose the helpful advice amongst the ...

    Jun 30, 2022

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Sierra and Will

    Heyo! I'm here to give a short review on your awesome short story here. To start off, I like how you start it. As with most short stories, you should ...

    Jun 29, 2021

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: ...

    Hello, I'm here to give a review the best I can. I am not good with History, so Ill let kattee help you there :P Ill start by saying that ...

    Jun 29, 2021

  • Art » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Eternal torment of the mortal soul

    Hello, short review from a flaming book! :D I just popped by, having never read or reviewed any of your work before (probably because your new XD). First, I love ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 4

    I, an Eldritch Tome, now pass my knowledge to you. Straight off the bat, I noticed that you put "I arose..." then the sentence after "I sit up" I think ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: A Peculiar Dream

    A floating tome here to give you a review! :D First thing I noticed was that it was a huge wall of text. So as The_Closet_Writer said, you should probably ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, Other
    Re: A great depression

    Hi! An Eldritch Tome here to give you a short review. To begin, I liked how you did your rhyming. It was consistent and all flowed nicely. Second, I think ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: The Moments Between

    Heyo, a Floating Eldritch Tome here with a review. Straight off the bat, you can tell you are describing everything nicely. While you describe a lot, however, you need to ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: When I Write

    An Eldritch Tome here for a little review. First of all, I liked that you wrote a poem about how you write. I thought it was very neat. Going with ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Fairytales do not exist

    Hello, and salutations. I'm here for a short review. First of all, I like your alliteration. The rhyming and sounds are fit together and roll off the tongue. I know ...

    Mar 30, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Wind-Traveler

    Salutations, my good fellow. I am here for a little review. First of all, wow. Just wow. I would just like to say that I loved this poem. Your use ...

    Mar 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Blackout Poem

    Heyo! A flaming, floating book here to give a review. First thing I noticed (and you did too) was that it was kind of hard to read. The connected sentences ...

    Mar 29, 2021

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical

    I like your poem, its awesome! I like your use of some words and the vision you plant in people's minds. It's great. I recommend you add punctuation. Commas in ...

    Mar 28, 2021

So verily with the hardship, there is a relief, verily with the hardship, there is a relief.
— Quran Ch 94:5-6