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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Forgotten Kingdom Of Ora - Chapter 4

    Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, there is a lot to like about this chapter! I think my favorite element was your ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Forgotten Kingdom of Ora - Chapter 3

    Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Accidental Magic: chapter 6

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! First things first, what a cliffhanger! I love how with every chapter, you continue to keep your readers on ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 11

    Hello, and Happy Review Day! I'm not exactly surprised at how horribly their first interaction went, but I must admit, I am disappointed in Jacks conduct here. If he's going ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: Birds of disruption and destruction: Ch I & II

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great day or night! Goodness, I think this might be my favorite thing that you've written! I'm starting with question two ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Forgotten Kingdom Of Ora - Chapter 2

    Hello! Popping back in for another Review! Once again, you've written a very compelling introduction, with a ton of great action! Though some of it felt a tad repetitive, mirroring ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Forgotten Kingdom Of Ora - Chapter 1

    Hello! I hope you are having a great day or night, and Happy Review Day! Immediately, your introduction caught my attention. I liked how it granted us insight into Elsa's ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Hayley and Magic

    Hello, and Happy Review Day! Something about this short was very whimsical. I loved the description of the garden, and how Hayley wished it reached out all across the lawn. ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Accidental Magic: Chapter 5

    Hello, and belated welcome to the site! I hope you're having a great day or night! This chapter was certainly explosive, and I loved it! The drama between the two ...

    Jan 23, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 10

    Hello again! I hope you're having a great day or night! As with the last chapter, I particularly enjoyed your subtle characterization. I liked getting insight into Jacks day-to-day life, ...

    Jan 17, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 9

    Hey! Sorry for getting to this a little later. I hope you're having a great day or night! This was a good chapter to slow down and get to know ...

    Jan 17, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: The Art of Deception.

    Hello, and welcome to the site! I hope you’re having a great day or night! This was a fascinating read, covered head-to-toe in fun figurative language and stunning word choice. ...

    Jan 17, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 8

    Hello! I hope you’re having an excellent day/night! As mentioned in my last review, it really is so great to see you back at this again! And let me tell ...

    Jan 14, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 7

    Hi! I hope you're having a great start to the New Year! It was very exciting to see you update this work, as I had really enjoyed the previous chapters! ...

    Jan 12, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.1

    Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night thus far! This made for an excellent opening chapter. It didn’t start too quickly, but it gave the reader a ...

    Dec 18, 2022


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