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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Paths Crossed chapter 10

    Hey! Happy Review Day!! Wow, that was a wild ride! I did not expect to be so into this chapter- usually when I jump in on a chapter in the ...

    Sun Jan 31, 2021 7:02 pm

  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Politics
    Re: Oh My Word

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    For training purposes: P***.

    Mon Jul 20, 2020 9:23 pm

  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic
    Re: a question to society part one

    Hello! I'd love to give you a review today- I think I will!! I enjoy works like this, where I get to think about the questions and concerns kinda being ...

    Fri Jul 17, 2020 11:04 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Twenty Two

    Hello there! I have this strong feeling that I've read and reviewed one of the chapters in this series before... but I'm not sure! I think your strength is descriptions ...

    Tue Jul 14, 2020 4:23 pm

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic
    Re: The Last Words of Rory the Fourth

    Hey there! I decided to stop by and give your work a review! It seems like this is part of a bigger project/story, which is awesome! I could tell you ...

    Mon Jul 13, 2020 2:08 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Lockdown Part 6.1

    Hello! It's interesting to see that you were inspired to write a story about a pandemic, I'm guessing that's due to the current state of the world! I have to ...

    Tue May 05, 2020 4:10 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 19.1)

    Hello! I have to admit now that this was really well written, and that being aid, I'm struggling to think of things to critique! Not too many chapter 19's make ...

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 10:43 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: A Lifetime (Chapter Four)

    Hey there! Just so you know, I have not read the previous chapters- I'm just going off of what's in this one, and trying to keep my critique relevant to ...

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 8:45 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic
    Re: Love Part 6

    Hello! Happy Review Day! c: Oh man, I remember those days of have UNBEARABLE crushes on people and just not being able to think of anything but them constantly! I ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 11:56 pm

  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: A lovers Disagreement.

    Hello! Happy Review Day! c: This was definitely pretty creepy and invoked a lot of thought within me about various things including about how people who are in abusive relationships ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 10:54 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (2)

    Hello! C: Wow! This is a pretty cool chapter. It definitely left me wanting to know what would happen next- and I especially was excite about meeting this Fuyus guy, ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 9:25 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Horror
    Re: Reverend Green's Bible of Misanthropy Chapter 3

    Hello there! So I'm honestly a little confused by this! But, I think it's a very unique and creative way to display your writing- I always love when people include ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 6:33 pm

  • Art » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: How Do You Plead: 6.1

    Hey CaptainJack! Well I was not expecting this when I walked in here! I really should start noticing ratings more, haha. Overall I feel like this chapter/part held up pretty ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 5:51 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 4 - Rise

    Hello there! I thought I'd stop by to help rescue your work from the Green Room! This was definitely an interesting read! You have a really fun, distinct way of ...

    Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:48 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Deleted

    Hey there, Dossereana! I'm trying to get back into the reviewing game, and thought I'd start with your chapter! c: Something I thought was worth noting is that I got ...

    Thu Jan 16, 2020 9:15 pm


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