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Hey! Happy Review Day!! Wow, that was a wild ride! I did not expect to be so into this chapter- usually when I jump in on a chapter in the ...

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Hello! I'd love to give you a review today- I think I will!! I enjoy works like this, where I get to think about the questions and concerns kinda being ...

Hello there! I have this strong feeling that I've read and reviewed one of the chapters in this series before... but I'm not sure! I think your strength is descriptions ...

Hey there! I decided to stop by and give your work a review! It seems like this is part of a bigger project/story, which is awesome! I could tell you ...

Hello! It's interesting to see that you were inspired to write a story about a pandemic, I'm guessing that's due to the current state of the world! I have to ...

Hello! I have to admit now that this was really well written, and that being aid, I'm struggling to think of things to critique! Not too many chapter 19's make ...

Hey there! Just so you know, I have not read the previous chapters- I'm just going off of what's in this one, and trying to keep my critique relevant to ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! c: Oh man, I remember those days of have UNBEARABLE crushes on people and just not being able to think of anything but them constantly! I ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! c: This was definitely pretty creepy and invoked a lot of thought within me about various things including about how people who are in abusive relationships ...

Hello! C: Wow! This is a pretty cool chapter. It definitely left me wanting to know what would happen next- and I especially was excite about meeting this Fuyus guy, ...

Hello there! So I'm honestly a little confused by this! But, I think it's a very unique and creative way to display your writing- I always love when people include ...

Hey CaptainJack! Well I was not expecting this when I walked in here! I really should start noticing ratings more, haha. Overall I feel like this chapter/part held up pretty ...

Hello there! I thought I'd stop by to help rescue your work from the Green Room! This was definitely an interesting read! You have a really fun, distinct way of ...

Hey there, Dossereana! I'm trying to get back into the reviewing game, and thought I'd start with your chapter! c: Something I thought was worth noting is that I got ...