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  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual
    Re: Void

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! So the first thing that struck me was the lack of punctuations in the third stanza. As long as I know, there are two ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2022 3:09 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: Guarding The Heart

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Ah well, this was a good story. So first and foremost, your paragraphs were way too long. I actually had a lot of ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2022 3:00 am

  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture
    Re: Sunshine

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting story and really a good one for a flash fiction. Okay, I haven't read many flash fictions neither have I ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2022 12:48 am

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Story w/o a name! Very short...

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was an incomplete short story and I didn't understand what to make of it. To me, it felt like a scene rather ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2022 12:28 am

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: They've Got No Idea

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Ah this was an ideal situations we can find people in. From what I understand, the story is about understanding love. I do have ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2022 12:16 am

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Jackknife

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a great piece over here. From a moment just after beginning, I started anticipating that something like this is going to happen. ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 4:56 pm

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: They Wanted A Perfect Computer

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! For a rough draft, it seemed to be excellent piece. I really liked the thought and the concept of the story. Let's get into ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 4:25 pm


  • Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well firsr and foremost, I really don't understand why it has been termed as ashort story. From no angle, it appears to be a ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 4:36 pm

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Vanilla

    Hey! Forever here with a review! As this is a scene, I am going to focus more on the sentence construction and the flow more. I was caught immediately by ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 1:10 pm

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: A Traffic Accident

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Huh, this was indeed a realistic piece out there. You actually managed to put forward a very realistic work. It was seeing a very ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 9:30 am

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: School Spirit

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a cool story. I really liked the world-building and the creepiness in it. However, I didn't understand a few things. Let's get ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 9:00 am

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: My Sole Reason For Suicide [Chapter One. Kitten]

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a beautiful piece here. I really liked how the mood of the story shifted in such a little amount of time. It ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 8:28 am

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
    Re: Bloody Raven

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I thought I would continue, so here I am. Wow, this was really a great read. I really liked knowing all the tragic incidents ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 7:18 am

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
    Re: Bloody Raven

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh this was a very creepy piece here. I too often have this fear of something unknown, of something which is not present, which ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 6:46 am

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Hidden Secret

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I don’t have a lot fo things to say about the particular piece except the fact that it was a nightmare and then she ...

    Sun Apr 10, 2022 6:21 am


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