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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Historical Fiction
    Re: Blurb for my novel

    hey hey, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started, shall we? "In a land not far away, in a time that wasn’t quite that long ago, there was a ...

    Sat Jun 19, 2021 11:33 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 18.2]

    Hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? Okay we straight make a skip to a part of this chapter that relly made me wheeze “So,” ...

    Sat Jun 19, 2021 11:13 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3

    Hey Hey, Ducklin here for a quick review! Let's start, shall we? I have to start off by telling you how humanly and though realistic you made the dragons. It ...

    Tue Apr 13, 2021 12:57 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Fantasy
    Re: Sunrise After the Rain

    hey hey, Ducklin here for a brief review!! let's get started, shall we? I have to start off by saying that your talent of describing things in a way that ...

    Tue Apr 13, 2021 12:23 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror
    Re: These Long Five Nights (Chapter 2 - Move)

    hey hey, Angel! Ducklin here for a quick review, let's get started, shall we? So first of all I really like your idea of the story to say it short, ...

    Thu Apr 08, 2021 1:26 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 13.2]

    Hey hey, long time no see Mordax, duckling here for a review! Let' get started shall we, I gotta be honest here I nearly found anything bad in this chapter, ...

    Tue Apr 06, 2021 2:59 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: At Least

    hey hey, Ducklin here! I'm here for a review so let's get started Raichu shall we? Actually, this isn't much of a review but more of me telling which parts ...

    Fri Mar 12, 2021 4:24 pm

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The people's leader

    Hey hey Illy! Ducklin here for a review Although this can't be considered as a real review, just me telling you how much I loved this poem. I adored the ...

    Thu Mar 11, 2021 7:12 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 11.2]

    Hey Hey Mordax! Ducklin here long time no see but I'm back, so let' get started. "The smell of ale and roasting meat wafted to greet her, and Rieka’s stomach ...

    Thu Mar 11, 2021 5:49 pm

  • Other » Romantic, Spiritual
    Re: Depression Cuts

    Hey hey Yumi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Well I can't actually call this a real review since I won't be giving critique but only ...

    Wed Jan 20, 2021 9:04 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 9

    Hey hey Yoshi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Minuses - So it's a realy interesting way of starting your chapter but (there is always a ...

    Tue Jan 19, 2021 8:08 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Set Adrift (Part 4)

    hey cidrianwritersguild! ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So first-off even if I didn't read the previous chapters I really likes the story line here. It ...

    Sun Jan 17, 2021 11:44 am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 5]

    Hey Mordax! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? I think I have to agree with the other comments this was just deep writing that reads so ...

    Sat Jan 16, 2021 3:43 pm


  • hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So the first thing I notices was something grammatically wrong, your "i" is typed small but should be ...

    Sat Jan 16, 2021 3:32 pm

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Hey Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? So first-off I really like the flow of your story. The words u used gave a clear view of ...

    Sun Jan 10, 2021 8:51 am


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