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hey hey, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started, shall we? "In a land not far away, in a time that wasn’t quite that long ago, there was a ...

Hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? Okay we straight make a skip to a part of this chapter that relly made me wheeze “So,” ...

Hey Hey, Ducklin here for a quick review! Let's start, shall we? I have to start off by telling you how humanly and though realistic you made the dragons. It ...

hey hey, Ducklin here for a brief review!! let's get started, shall we? I have to start off by saying that your talent of describing things in a way that ...

hey hey, Angel! Ducklin here for a quick review, let's get started, shall we? So first of all I really like your idea of the story to say it short, ...

Hey hey, long time no see Mordax, duckling here for a review! Let' get started shall we, I gotta be honest here I nearly found anything bad in this chapter, ...

hey hey, Ducklin here! I'm here for a review so let's get started Raichu shall we? Actually, this isn't much of a review but more of me telling which parts ...

Hey hey Illy! Ducklin here for a review Although this can't be considered as a real review, just me telling you how much I loved this poem. I adored the ...

Hey Hey Mordax! Ducklin here long time no see but I'm back, so let' get started. "The smell of ale and roasting meat wafted to greet her, and Rieka’s stomach ...

Hey hey Yumi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Well I can't actually call this a real review since I won't be giving critique but only ...

Hey hey Yoshi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Minuses - So it's a realy interesting way of starting your chapter but (there is always a ...

hey cidrianwritersguild! ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So first-off even if I didn't read the previous chapters I really likes the story line here. It ...

Hey Mordax! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? I think I have to agree with the other comments this was just deep writing that reads so ...

hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So the first thing I notices was something grammatically wrong, your "i" is typed small but should be ...

Hey Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? So first-off I really like the flow of your story. The words u used gave a clear view of ...