Young Writers Society

Thanks for asking me to read this, Moonflower. I've been so busy that I haven't come to Yewis for a little while. T'was nice to read a cool poem. The ...

Hey there, Ljm00036! I would like to hear this recited. I think it'd sound great being read by a dark, foreboding voice. Maybe we can see the silhouette of a ...

Hey there, Ishan212. This was a really sweet tribute. :) I feel like the people left behind just weren't ready for his parting (no one ever is) and they're having ...

Hey there, Dracula is here for a review. :D Sunlight was illuminating the east, setting the mountain peaks ablaze with orange. It was peaceful, in an utterly devastated way. I ...

Hey, AliceinBluue. I hope you're feeling a little more human by the time you read this. :) Word-wise, there's only one bit I felt didn't work very well, and I'll ...

Hey there Taslimalima. :D I thought this was a sweet piece of writing. I'd almost sort it into the poetry category, but since you've not called it a poem, I ...

Hello there, LeutnantSchweinehund, I am here to review. :D My reviewing style is somewhat different to most people's. Instead of summarising things at the end, I like to jot down ...

Hey there, Tucker! There are a few things I noticed as I read... Not yet, anyways. Owen suspected that Francis, like many of the town’s other inhabitants, were in shock. ...

Hello again, soundofmind! The Green Room is now and empty so I went lurking around the website for things to review... and found this! The interrogator's face twists up, his ...

Because children of fire and brimstone love with everything they are and everything they might be, they love with all their heart and souls and body, and everything in between. ...

Hey there, AneiDoru, I'm here for a quick review. :D The first paragraph was a good 'what previously happened' summary to keep the reader up to date. It didn't feel ...

Alright, here I am for part 2. :D This is how the story starts. Once upon a time, there was a girl born of fire and brimstone, she grew and ...

Ahoy there, pirateslife4me. :D For this review, I thought I'd share two good things and two things to work on... With Rosa's point of view, the thing that could use ...

Hey there, whatchamacallit. :D Dracula is here to give a short review. As a vegetarian, I appreciate the topic of this poem. My interpretation is that this is in the ...

Ahoy there, AliceinBluue! :P I'm here to review. The noticing comes later. I really liked the narrator's voice. This off-hand remark was my favourite. It's great how you gave it ...