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Jazzy Dracula

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Shadow Starkers Poem

    Thanks for asking me to read this, Moonflower. I've been so busy that I haven't come to Yewis for a little while. T'was nice to read a cool poem. The ...

    May 18, 2018

  • Poetry » Film, Narrative
    Re: Madame Mischief

    Hey there, Ljm00036! I would like to hear this recited. I think it'd sound great being read by a dark, foreboding voice. Maybe we can see the silhouette of a ...

    Oct 11, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The Dining Table

    Hey there, Ishan212. This was a really sweet tribute. :) I feel like the people left behind just weren't ready for his parting (no one ever is) and they're having ...

    Sep 29, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Deathbound - Chapter 4.1

    Hey there, Dracula is here for a review. :D Sunlight was illuminating the east, setting the mountain peaks ablaze with orange. It was peaceful, in an utterly devastated way. I ...

    Sep 29, 2017

  • Poetry » General, Romantic
    Re: Burn

    Hey, AliceinBluue. I hope you're feeling a little more human by the time you read this. :) Word-wise, there's only one bit I felt didn't work very well, and I'll ...

    Sep 29, 2017

  • Article / Essay » Other, Other
    Re: Mirror Lake

    Hey there Taslimalima. :D I thought this was a sweet piece of writing. I'd almost sort it into the poetry category, but since you've not called it a poem, I ...

    Sep 29, 2017

  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual
    Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    Hello there, LeutnantSchweinehund, I am here to review. :D My reviewing style is somewhat different to most people's. Instead of summarising things at the end, I like to jot down ...

    Sep 28, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Sniper: Prologue (1/3)

    Hey there, Tucker! There are a few things I noticed as I read... Not yet, anyways. Owen suspected that Francis, like many of the town’s other inhabitants, were in shock. ...

    Sep 28, 2017

  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I'm really good at photoshop (pt 1)

    Hello again, soundofmind! The Green Room is now and empty so I went lurking around the website for things to review... and found this! The interrogator's face twists up, his ...

    Sep 27, 2017

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 3)

    Because children of fire and brimstone love with everything they are and everything they might be, they love with all their heart and souls and body, and everything in between. ...

    Sep 25, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: The Light Maiden's mark, Chapter 8 - Unfortunate Realities

    Hey there, AneiDoru, I'm here for a quick review. :D The first paragraph was a good 'what previously happened' summary to keep the reader up to date. It didn't feel ...

    Sep 24, 2017

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 2)

    Alright, here I am for part 2. :D This is how the story starts. Once upon a time, there was a girl born of fire and brimstone, she grew and ...

    Sep 24, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Re: Rosa White

    Ahoy there, pirateslife4me. :D For this review, I thought I'd share two good things and two things to work on... With Rosa's point of view, the thing that could use ...

    Sep 24, 2017

  • Poetry » Humor, Horror
    Re: Gutted

    Hey there, whatchamacallit. :D Dracula is here to give a short review. As a vegetarian, I appreciate the topic of this poem. My interpretation is that this is in the ...

    Sep 22, 2017

  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Re: Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 1)

    Ahoy there, AliceinBluue! :P I'm here to review. The noticing comes later. I really liked the narrator's voice. This off-hand remark was my favourite. It's great how you gave it ...

    Sep 22, 2017

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