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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Beautiful Girl

    I am seriously speechless. I was getting all prepared to write a long review in detail to make for my absence on this site for the last year but... Wow. ...

    Sep 25, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Masquerader Chapter Six Part One

    Eeek! Yay, you have the next part up! I love this story. :) Here's my *sorta* review: Ranael, what are you doing?! Do you know how dangerous it is for ...

    May 4, 2011

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: The Passenger

    Hello! I'm here as requested. (: I don't know much about poetry (the forms of writing it, rhyming, ect) but I do like to read it. I've read your poem ...

    Apr 11, 2011

  • Lyrics » General, General
    Re: Dead Summer

    Hello! Here as requested. (: First off, I just have to say: I give this song two thumps up! The first time I read it I could hear music to ...

    Apr 8, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Girl Has Been Silenced

    Hello, there! I'm here as requested. (: This was an interesting piece, I can honestly say that I have never read anything like it (in a good way). I really ...

    Apr 8, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General
    Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 2)

    Hey! :D During the fighting I sort of got confused of what was going on, but at the same time I could picture it as a battle scene from a ...

    Apr 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General
    Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 1)

    Hello, there! I'm here to review as requested. :) Sadly, I was a little reluctant to read this at first. I haven't read much books during the crusades, and the ...

    Apr 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5

    Again, I totally love this. :D Destroy Maliel?! What?! I can't believe that. Absirinthe must be stopped. *looks intently at Megsug, watching as she types away at the next chapter* ...

    Mar 8, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Patterns (chapter one)

    Oh, very interesting. :D Hello, TheSilverLining! Your only ten? I could never write that well when I was ten. :) I think you could become a great author once your ...

    Mar 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Deleted

    Oooh... that ending is a HUGE cliff hanger. Gosh, this is such an awesome book. I can't get enough of it! :D The Flashback/memory: At first I thought it was ...

    Mar 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Deleted

    Sweet. :D This chapter seemed fairly short, but I still enjoyed very much. :) So, the Masquerader is the queen... yay! *smiles wide with joy* She's taking care of her ...

    Mar 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Deleted

    Best part yet. :) This whole chapter made me giddy with excitement, and worry that Camden was going to die! I'm so glad the Masquerader saved him, but someone has ...

    Mar 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: A New Breed of Hero...

    Hello, CrtlAltDelete! So far "A New Breed of Hero" is an interesting story and has potential, just as Onceuponatim3xo said. Now, I seem to be the only living person around ...

    Mar 2, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Deleted

    Simple and pure awesomeness. (is that even a word? Probably not.) I can't believe Gane Shaebor *growls with anger*. How dare he! *DeadEnds shakes her head in disbelief* After everyone ...

    Mar 2, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Paul0003/avatars-100x100-smilies/001.htm

    Hello, tinkembell! I'm here as requested. :D I've never come across a story like this and I'm glad that you wrote this. Paul0003/avatars-100x100-smilies-little-crest/001.htm was an interesting charact

    Feb 26, 2011


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