Poetry » Lyrical, Other
Re: I count my sins
I love the cadence in this piece (and I use that term colloquially). I especially love the change in momentum in the second to last stanza with "As they close ...
Article / Essay » General, General
Re: Young Writers Society is more than a website
It's great to hear that you've been enjoying your time using this website. One can definitely glean your passion for "YWS" from this essay. There is a veritable smorgasbord of ...
Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction
This is a really cool story, and pretty touching. It's pretty unrealistic though, so you may want to tie up some loose ends. For example, a children's home wouldn't adopt ...
Poetry » Narrative, General
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("Clarity" by Aley) A warning of length appeared on the tagline to "Clarity." What better way is there than that to draw in a ...
Other » Supernatural, Dramatic
Re: Falling Under: Episode I: "Wonderland" (Sneak Peek)
Barnyard Reviews: A Review for You ("Falling Under: Ep 1: 'Wonderland' (Sneak Peak)" by Maximilia) As a strong proponent of cryptic and sociostantial writing, it is always an event to ...
Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
Re: For worse or for better, we are better together
Barnyard Reviews: A Review for You ("For Worse or for Better, We are Better Together" by Ossum) Recommended to me by my colleague @timmyjake, the work "For Worse or For ...
Short Story » Fantasy, Health
Re: An unrealistic and very happy story about ants.
A masterpiece of epic proportions and a brilliant display of understanding the English language. The characterization of the narrator is superb, and although you identify with him, you also feel ...
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 14
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("The Kingdom of Boredom: Chapter 14" by dragonfphoenix) A specific pursuit that often lacks commonality is the random selection of a novel excerpt, and ...
Novel / Chapter » General, General
Re: 25 to life. (work in progress, more to come)
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("25 to life" by ahollander) First, of all, I just wanna tell you, my friend, this story definitely had a lot of potential. The ...
Poetry » Realistic, General
Re: Hold Me Down
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("Hold Me Down" by GriffinClaw) As I was scrolling through the contents of one of my favorite literary websites, I happened upon a poem ...
Poetry » Humor, General
Re: Little Mischiefs!
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("Little Mischiefs!" by Ary) This elaborate metaphor for descent into rock bottom is astounding. There is an obvious literate reference to folklore in this ...
Poetry » Culture, Humor
Re: Jolly Christmas
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("Jolly Christmas" by Ary) In a world where Christmas is easily the most commercialized Holiday, including Halloween, and the main thoughts on everyone's mind ...
Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
Re: How the other half lives
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("How the other half lives" by Dreamy) While reading the poem "How the other half lives," I was constantly thinking of the collection of ...
Short Story » Dramatic, General
Re: Senseless Words (Senseless World)
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You ("Senseless Words" by GeeLyria) The story "Senseless Words" describes itself as a senseless story. But unless my definition of senseless is inaccurate, the descripti
Article / Essay » General, General
Re: Act natural when you find yourself in the middle of a political movement
Barnyard Reviews: A Review For You (Act Natural When You Find Yourself in the Middle of a Political Movement) I happened upon this article knowing nothing of this Shahbag Movement, ...