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Such gorgeous poetry. You have a talent for arranging and finding appropriate words before putting them together in lovely sequences. Since this is a review, I did have to find ...
May 21, 2021
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Hey RandomTalks! So I really loved the premise of this story--it started as a tale of a mother's insecurity and then evolved into the story of a family. I do ...
May 20, 2021
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Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
Re: The Fantasy Project - Chapter 1 - Annabella Fenrandidrr
Okay, Bobby! Celty here! It was a good concept. From the top: I like her name: Annabella Fenrandidrr. The first name is pretty fantasy-ish, which fits the story, and Fenrandidrr ...
Apr 4, 2014
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...they what ? The poor billy goat. I don't want to think what would happen if it was my family being skinned and cooked in front of me. That was ...
Apr 4, 2014
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Celty here! Okay, I have to say this before anything else: the story is wunderbar. As in, I love the idea, I love the setting, and even though the characters ...
Apr 4, 2014
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Lily, Celty here! This is my first review in a while, but I'll try to say what I think, mmkays? With that out of the way, let's get to the ...
Apr 4, 2014
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Hi Outage! It seems interesting, but I had a few itchy points about this chapter. One of these was the fact that there was virtually almost no description; mostly dialogue, ...
May 19, 2012
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Crescent... At first I thought it was a vampire story, but then I realized it was too...canine to be vampiric. ;D In the end, I'm forced to wonder whether the ...
Jan 2, 2012
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Hmm...I liked it. The imagery at the beginning reminds me of a spaceship, though, actually. Wonder if you were going for that? :D I'm not gonna lecture you on flow ...
Oct 27, 2011
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The last review for this novel. :D Let's see...you kept the focus on your main character like you did with the second part. But I was a little disappointed at ...
Sep 29, 2011
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Okay, Noir here reporting for the second part! Now, this part I liked better than the last part. We find out more about your character and understand some of where ...
Sep 29, 2011
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Hey ajt! :D So I decided to read your novel--entirely. This is me after having read all three parts, so let's see my particular opinion on this part...while it's generally ...
Sep 29, 2011
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Hi Saccharine! I don't normally review poems, but since today is Review Day I'll do my best. :) So let's get down to the facts, shall we? Okay. Basically, I ...
Sep 25, 2011
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Hey pup! Well, this is my first time properly reviewing a lyrical piece, so I might not be spot on about all my observations. But let's get down to what ...
Sep 25, 2011
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Allen Paige never meant to lie when he said that he would only be away for ten minutes. (Interesting beginning. It has me curious and wondering what you mean by ...
Sep 25, 2011
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