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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Poems from the heart

    Such gorgeous poetry. You have a talent for arranging and finding appropriate words before putting them together in lovely sequences. Since this is a review, I did have to find ...

    Fri May 21, 2021 10:07 am

  • Short Story » Other, Realistic
    Re: In The Whole Wide World

    Hey RandomTalks! So I really loved the premise of this story--it started as a tale of a mother's insecurity and then evolved into the story of a family. I do ...

    Thu May 20, 2021 10:26 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Fantasy Project - Chapter 1 - Annabella Fenrandidrr

    Okay, Bobby! Celty here! It was a good concept. From the top: I like her name: Annabella Fenrandidrr. The first name is pretty fantasy-ish, which fits the story, and Fenrandidrr ...

    Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:23 am

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: The Black Billy Goat 2/2

    ...they what ? The poor billy goat. I don't want to think what would happen if it was my family being skinned and cooked in front of me. That was ...

    Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:35 pm

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: The Black Billy Goat 1/2

    Celty here! Okay, I have to say this before anything else: the story is wunderbar. As in, I love the idea, I love the setting, and even though the characters ...

    Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:25 pm

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Forgotten Quest

    Lily, Celty here! This is my first review in a while, but I'll try to say what I think, mmkays? With that out of the way, let's get to the ...

    Fri Apr 04, 2014 9:12 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual
    Re: Canem Inferni - Chapter 1 *Edited: Take Two*

    Hi Outage! It seems interesting, but I had a few itchy points about this chapter. One of these was the fact that there was virtually almost no description; mostly dialogue, ...

    Sat May 19, 2012 8:17 pm

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Tainted Love

    Crescent... At first I thought it was a vampire story, but then I realized it was too...canine to be vampiric. ;D In the end, I'm forced to wonder whether the ...

    Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:22 am

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Fit

    Hmm...I liked it. The imagery at the beginning reminds me of a spaceship, though, actually. Wonder if you were going for that? :D I'm not gonna lecture you on flow ...

    Thu Oct 27, 2011 4:55 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Proxy pt. 3 (final part)

    The last review for this novel. :D Let's see...you kept the focus on your main character like you did with the second part. But I was a little disappointed at ...

    Thu Sep 29, 2011 4:13 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Proxy pt. 2

    Okay, Noir here reporting for the second part! Now, this part I liked better than the last part. We find out more about your character and understand some of where ...

    Thu Sep 29, 2011 4:05 pm

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Proxy pt. 1

    Hey ajt! :D So I decided to read your novel--entirely. This is me after having read all three parts, so let's see my particular opinion on this part...while it's generally ...

    Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:59 pm

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: A Love to Last Forever

    Hi Saccharine! I don't normally review poems, but since today is Review Day I'll do my best. :) So let's get down to the facts, shall we? Okay. Basically, I ...

    Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:45 pm

  • Lyrics » General, General
    Re: Invade My Heart

    Hey pup! Well, this is my first time properly reviewing a lyrical piece, so I might not be spot on about all my observations. But let's get down to what ...

    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:50 pm

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Two Little Beautiful Girls

    Allen Paige never meant to lie when he said that he would only be away for ten minutes. (Interesting beginning. It has me curious and wondering what you mean by ...

    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:14 pm

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