Poetry » Romantic, General
Re: The spring of my senses
Hi, I read this poem because the title caught my attention. It is an attractive title. The poem is an innocent portrayal of love, or maybe the early stages of ...
Short Story » Realistic, General
Re: The Waiting Room
Hi, This short story does present an interesting idea. You have introduced your main character, and presented their thoughts and perceptions (which is all great), but it is, however, cliched ...
Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
Re: 3:39 am
Hi, First of all, I am new around here too, so I hope you have a great time reading and writing in here! :))) Coming to your narrative, it is ...
Short Story » Horror, Humor
Re: What Would You Do?
Hi, This is an exciting snippet of a story. After reading it, I felt like it was a nightmare that the main character could possibly be having with a game ...
Poetry » Romantic, Horror
Re: 10 years of hiding bruises
Hi, Great job with the structure. It makes the reader really curious and want to read it right away. For me, the two most vivid images in this poem are ...
Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
Hi, I like the structure of the poem. It keeps the reader interested and excited. I like that this poem has brevity and a twist at the end. It deals ...
Art » Fantasy, General
Re: Whimsical Wisps
Hi, here is a quick review: I noticed that nature and its vastness are a couple of overarching themes here...you have tried to describe the sky as an 'ocean', and ...
Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy
Re: the texture of flower petals
Dear manilla, Your language is admirable and very evocative. My curiosity was piqued by this piece, and I find myself wanting to know how the rest of the story goes. ...