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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 4.2

    hi~ The sunset, already made early by the winter, was hastened by the sun disappearing behind the tall peaks as Leilan and Kaja arrived at the Plaza of Claws. The ...

    Jan 7, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 4.1

    hey what's up we're gonna pretend it hasn't been forever since I reviewed the last parts of this Marius wouldn’t even notice it if he did, since the seats didn’t ...

    Jan 7, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 3.2

    what's up She chuckled. “Do I actually need this?” like I said in my last review, I understand that Mireya's a chaotic dumbass, but lines like this make her come ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 3.1

    good fricking time of day my friend, I'm distracting myself from real life by blessing you with a review today “If it’s Rationale magic, would that be unusual enough for ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 2.2

    wow, look, back to review this again, who could've guessed~ “Thank you,” Dawn replied, closing the doors behind them. “And sorry for the bother.” Kasumi had the grace to stay ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 2.1

    Surprise, it's me again~ Ooh, new people! Love the instant characterization of Dawn and Kasumi. With a single paragraph about each of them, we know who these people are. Not ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 1.2

    oh hi, it's me again~ magic time magic time magic time!! I love reading about magic systems and finding out how that all works and you're doing a fairly good ...

    Sep 19, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 1.1

    oh hi there~ You've already got a lot of good critiques for this so I'm probably not going to say much, I'm really only doing this because it feels awkward ...

    Sep 19, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: The Sorcerer's Secret, Chapter 4

    HI THERE I'M HERE TO REVIEW "Coryn, I don't know how the hell you saved this bird," Austin repeated for the millionth time, "but this is the most succulent, tastiest ...

    Mar 5, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: The Sorcerer's Secret, Chapter 3

    YEET IT'S TAKEN ME A WHILE BUT I'M HERE The drive to Jackson had been slower than Coryn had expected it to be, and much less energy-efficient than he was ...

    Mar 5, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: The Sorcerer's Secret, Chapter 2

    hlaskdjflkdsjfldksjf TWO reviews in the same night??? look at me go Hi!! I'm here!! I love this!!!!!! Starting off strong with giving us a date and place for this! Not ...

    Feb 27, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    Re: The Sorcerer's Secret, Chapter 1

    hlkadsfj anxiety go yeet let's do this !!!! Amazing!!!!!! I absolutely love the way you've written Deserae in this. You've got her almost spot-on, honestly. Also, I have made this ...

    Feb 27, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: I languish all the tide.

    Hey there! I hope you're having a great day :) I really like this! The imagery is really vivid and the entire thing is very relatable. The words you chose ...

    Sep 16, 2020


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