Young Writers Society

hey thanks for the commont i changed things around have a look sometime.

Hello! <(see what I did there) xD!

Thank you for reviewing my contest entry, "Hello." It's helped a lot - and I've changed a few of the details that you've mentioned around.

Hello(:

Your biography is, I think, what most people want to express but don't. You're so right; people should make an effor to get to know the real person.

I see you're new over here; you already have a whole load of stuff in your portfolio though. I'm going to check it out after I've signed (Why oh why has no-one signed your guestbook yet?)

Have a nice day.

Sarah

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