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  • Reviewed the second bit, will do the third probably next weekend if not before.


  • Euhuman
    Oct 29, 2011

    Thanks for the review =) =) Thoroughly appreciated =)


    bexy89 No problem, hope it helped :)
    Oct 29, 2011


  • sarebear
    Oct 28, 2011

    The review that I promised is up! And more on the way for the other sections!


    bexy89 Thank you!
    Oct 29, 2011

  • Thanks for the follow :) *follows back*


  • sarebear
    Oct 25, 2011

    Although I haven't had a chance to review yet (will do over weekend) I was wondering if you had any questions/comments/concerns for your favorite buddy?


  • manisha
    Oct 25, 2011

    thnaks for the review! I guess i over looked the spelling mistakes! I will surely edit it!
    thank you again!


    bexy89 You're welcome!
    Oct 25, 2011


  • purpleandblue22
    Oct 24, 2011

    Thanks soooo much for your comment on Sparrow and Spaghetti! :D I'm sorry about the length, but I hate posting extremely long chapters so I usually break it up at a natural spot. It's just that this chapter was uneven in that the first half was a flashback/dream and this was the only natural spot.

    And to be honest, I need nitpickyness (is that a word?). I am absolutly awful at spelling and grammar (although hopefully getting better).

    Long story short, THANKS AGAIN!


    bexy89 No problem! Your story being short wasn't a bad thing, it was mainly just because I wanted to read more :)
    Oct 24, 2011


  • Shadowlight
    Oct 24, 2011

    Hey Bexy,
    I saw on the Buddy System wall that you are looking for more ways to get more involved with YWS. I don't know if you'd be interested but I have found for myself that the Stroybook RPG are a wonderful way to meet other YWS members and practice writing.
    There are so many wonderful SB (storybooks) out there to choose from, just look for one that is just starting up or that doesn't say "closed"- that would mean it's all full for new characters.

    I created a SB that is just starting up, and I am looking for more people to join in.
    it is a called "The round table wars"- it's going to be a Arthurian legend SB.
    I don't know if you'd be interested but if you are come check the SB out!
    (the SB writers are a crazy bunch of insane writers- but we're also pretty fun too) :3
    No pressure- I just want to say that.
    This is a ONLY IF YOU WANT TOO invitation. :)
    See you later!
    <33


    bexy89 Hey, thanks for the heads up, I'll go and take a look :) x
    Oct 24, 2011


  • Shadowlight
    Oct 16, 2011

    Hi welcome to YWS!!
    I”m Shadowlight and if you have any questions about ANYTHING please feel free to give me a shout!
    Also for new members there is a club called “The Buddy System”. It is where new members can find a more experienced YWS member to act as a mentor- to help show them the ropes and all the fun things you can do on this site. If you go to the top and click on the tab marked clubs then find clubs- The buddy club is right there. All you have to do is just post a little something on the wall about who you are and what your looking for, there are many mentors who would love to help.
    Welcome again to YWS!!


    bexy89 Thank you :) I'll check it out!
    Oct 24, 2011


  • Betheny
    Oct 16, 2011

    Welcome to the YWS, if you have any questions please just ask. I wont bite, I promise. Also if you ever want any reviews, then let me know. :) Anyway, welcome.


    bexy89 Hi there, thank you :) I have just posted an extract of my story. It's called Wherever You Will go although I have no idea where to find it and if you can edit it once it's submitted?
    Oct 24, 2011


    Betheny To find it, go to 'my profile' in the top left, second one in. Once there you should be able to see six boxes if you scroll down a little, (wall/info/portfolio/lit. comments/gifts/friends) click on portfolio. This will bring up all of your works, to edit it you select the work you want to change, in the top right of your work should be a little box saying edit, press that then edit away.
    Hope this helps or makes any sense at all x

    Oct 24, 2011

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