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OH, I didn't even notice that I mixed up the nbd, thanks for pointing that out!

Hey! Just wanted to drop by and say thank you for that review you left. It was really, really helpful. Once I finish editing chapter one, I'll have to put up the new version--and definitely give you a thanks in the A/N. Otherwise, I'm glad you liked the story so far and, yeah, I'll have to keep an eye out for things like you mentioned in the latter chapters. Also, if you need a review in the future? Just ask. I know I might not be on the top of my game when it comes to my own first drafts, but I can be a bit of a Grammar Nazi and Book Snob otherwise so maybe I could help.

Thank you so much for the review! I'm going to go with most of your suggestions except a couple. But thanks again! It means a lot to me. And I'd be happy to review any of your stuff.

Thanks for the follow but why may I ask are you following me?
p.s. if your answer contains anything to do with the word "stalker" or "creeper" your my new best friend

I really appreciate the advice. When I finally am able to re-live all the parts of the break-up, I will re-write the whole piece and add all the details. I'm usually a better writer, but that was a touchy subject...just a little too soon. Thank you!

Thank you so much! That really helped! I knew there was something wrong there! I just couldn't find out what it was. You're right. That didn't make much sence. I'll fix that! Thanks a ton!

Thank you sooooo much for review my story. I really apreciate it! Also, welcome to YWS!

Thanks for very much for your review! and welcome to YWS i can already see that you'll be a great member!