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    Ignatius5453
    Aug 31, 2011

    you mind reviewing this? viewtopic.php?t=86938


  • CuteJackRussell
    Jun 2, 2011

    Really that's awesome!


  • CuteJackRussell
    Jun 1, 2011

    Welcome to young writers society
    (sorry it's a little late!)


    silverkey It's alright. c: Thanks!
    Jun 1, 2011

  • I like your topic's title over in Welcome Mat. Peter Pan ref?


    silverkey Ahhh, latelatelate reply, but it's actually a ref to a line of one of my favorite fanfics. But yeah, the fanfic was prolly alluding to Peter Pan. xD
    Jul 23, 2011

  • Thank you ! Ahm about Lois, he is not an ordinary reomi not just because he cant control water or air, there is much more about it. haha.. Thank you again for your review!

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    lele253isme
    May 30, 2011

    Thank you for followng me...

  • Welcome to YWS, though I am a little late.


    silverkey Thanks! c:
    May 30, 2011

  • Hi, silverkey. ^-^ Thanks for the follow. Welcome to the site!


  • MeanMrMustard
    May 30, 2011

    Thanks for the kind comment.

  • Hi there!


    silverkey Hello. C:
    May 30, 2011


  • Ranger Hawk
    May 30, 2011

    Hey thanks for the follow! Welcome to YWS. :D


    silverkey Thank you! Your work is really great. :D
    May 30, 2011


    Ranger Hawk Aww thanks! :D Let me know if you even want a review or anything!
    May 30, 2011


  • silentpages
    May 30, 2011

    Thanks for the review, and welcome to the site. ^^ The grammar nitpick that you pointed out is, I think, a matter of style. If you're going by the grammar books we have in school, what you suggested changing is correct, but I've seen the way I did it used as well. Depends on the rhythm you're going for, ect. Glad you're liking the story so far. ^^ I look forward to seeing you around the site. :)


    silverkey Yeah, I tend to write my sentences with a lot of ands too, actually. Just wanted to point it out in case you didn't mean to write it that way. :D And thank you!
    May 30, 2011



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