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  • ChocolateMoonLight
    Mar 30, 2011

    Hey! guys, I have put the first part of the story I'm working on. Please review it and tell me how is it so far....



And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
— Bartimaeus of Uruk