Young Writers Society

You were the first person for which I ever wrote a review on YWS. I went back and read some of 'A Son's Crusade' and still love it. I'm not sure where you went, but I hope you're doing well.

O.O That's the longest thanks I ever got for a review. XD

Oh well, you're welcome! Since I want to see more of your posts *follows*.

It kind of was to begin with, but I figured nobody would get that so changed it xD

Twas a person

Thanks for the review Sean! xD

Good to have you back

Thanks a bunch for your review and especially for looking up the chess part. ^^ I just read a book which happened in 11th century India, and it had chess in it, so I figured it might have been current in 17th century Italy as well. But really, thanks for researching that. I'll throw in more description, it ought to be a blast.

Alrighty, next part up. ^^ And I did get some of that room-description in the first one.

I'm actually having a hard time fitting any room-description in, as it just doesn't fit in with the flow. Damn me and my perfectionism But yeah, the next part won't be up for a while, as I'm going away on a holiday for some time. I'll definetely hit you up with it once it comes around though.

Thanks a lot for the review! ^^ Never wrote a "calm scene" before really, so good to know it worked out. I'll throw in some description of the room, I knew I was forgetting something.

Back from holidays! Finally can get on with some writing.

Part three of gretal's story is up if you fancy a read...no pressure thou! Thanks, Alia

Aww...thanks! I'll definately keep you posted! Lol

You're Welcome. I figured the whole theme of losing what once was, but could tell how a spirity, sort of Medevily ( meh...how to put this?) thing infulenced your prose. Anyway, have a good day.

Haha yes I guess it is. :S Erm I think it's only the one test but I still don't want to do it. I'm dreading Year 10 .