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  • You were the first person for which I ever wrote a review on YWS. I went back and read some of 'A Son's Crusade' and still love it. I'm not sure where you went, but I hope you're doing well. :)

  • LemonyIce
    Nov 21, 2011

    O.O That's the longest thanks I ever got for a review. XD

    Oh well, you're welcome! Since I want to see more of your posts *follows*. ;)

  • IcyFlame
    Sep 24, 2011

    It kind of was to begin with, but I figured nobody would get that so changed it xD

  • IcyFlame
    Sep 22, 2011

    Twas a person :)

  • IcyFlame
    Sep 21, 2011

    Thanks for the review Sean! xD

  • Good to have you back :)

  • WaitingForLife
    Jul 31, 2011

    Thanks a bunch for your review and especially for looking up the chess part. ^^ I just read a book which happened in 11th century India, and it had chess in it, so I figured it might have been current in 17th century Italy as well. But really, thanks for researching that. :) I'll throw in more description, it ought to be a blast. ;)

  • WaitingForLife
    Jul 19, 2011

    Alrighty, next part up. ^^ And I did get some of that room-description in the first one.

  • WaitingForLife
    Jul 16, 2011

    I'm actually having a hard time fitting any room-description in, as it just doesn't fit in with the flow. Damn me and my perfectionism :P But yeah, the next part won't be up for a while, as I'm going away on a holiday for some time. I'll definetely hit you up with it once it comes around though.

  • WaitingForLife
    Jul 16, 2011

    Thanks a lot for the review! ^^ Never wrote a "calm scene" before really, so good to know it worked out. I'll throw in some description of the room, I knew I was forgetting something. :P

  • medievalwriter
    Jul 15, 2011

    Back from holidays! Finally can get on with some writing. :D

  • AmeliaCogin
    Jun 22, 2011

    Part three of gretal's story is up if you fancy a read...no pressure thou! Thanks, Alia

  • AmeliaCogin
    Jun 19, 2011

    Aww...thanks! I'll definately keep you posted! Lol :D

  • AmeliaCogin
    Jun 14, 2011

    You're Welcome. I figured the whole theme of losing what once was, but could tell how a spirity, sort of Medevily ( meh...how to put this?) thing infulenced your prose. Anyway, have a good day.

    AmeliaCogin Fancy repaying the review? Would you please be able to read and perhaps drop a line on my prologue and 1st chapter of my Novel in Historical Fiction Novels? They're under untitled and neither are particularly long. Nitpicks are appreciated. If you haven't the time, don't worry! ;)
    Jun 14, 2011

    medievalwriter Yeah sure :)
    I was going to have a look through your stuff later this evening since I have work soon :(
    But yeah sure, I'll have a look.
    By the way your thoughts on my poem being medievaly are slightly true, I tried to give it a sense of magic and mystery about it which does go hand in hand with the medieval times. :)

    Jun 14, 2011

  • Random avatar
    May 29, 2011

    Haha yes I guess it is. :S Erm I think it's only the one test but I still don't want to do it. I'm dreading Year 10 :(.

My humanity is bound up in yours, for we can only be human together.
— Bishop Desmond Tutu