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  • snowberry23
    Nov 27, 2012

    Thanks for liking my poem!


  • JoyceSparrows
    Apr 1, 2012

    I have been gone from YWS for so long, I think that everyone has all but forgotten me... no has made any comments on my new poem. No, this is not self pity; it just means that have to get on my reviewing. :)


  • JoyceSparrows
    Jul 19, 2011

    My novel is currently on hold since I need to do a little more research on the Edwardian era.


    WelcomingException http://edwardianpromenade.com/
    This is a really good website for the Edwardian Era.

    Aug 6, 2011


    JoyceSparrows Thank you
    Aug 9, 2011

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  • JoyceSparrows
    Jul 14, 2011

    I have finally started my novel!! The Prologue is up and I just need to finnish writting chapter 1


  • purplepen
    Apr 4, 2011

    Thanks for the reveiw! :)


  • writerwithacause
    Mar 27, 2011

    Thank you so much, JoyceSparrows! :D *feels relieved now* I was afraid somebody would suggest me to place this in America. That would've killed me. D: I am so glad you like the chapter, I hope I won't disppoint you further. :)


  • Button
    Mar 23, 2011

    I adore your username. Just so ya know. :)


    JoyceSparrows Thank you!
    Mar 27, 2011


  • Yanni1995
    Mar 13, 2011

    thanks for the comment. I'll work on it. ;) you're a big help!


    JoyceSparrows No poblem! :)
    Mar 13, 2011


  • paperbackheart
    Mar 13, 2011

    I loved your poem Indifference! You are a great writer!


    JoyceSparrows Yay! Thanks!
    Mar 13, 2011


  • Lilicia
    Mar 11, 2011

    Hey! No problem :) I read the edited version, what you added sounds great. Aww the image of horses sticking their heads under low branches to make their necks longer is so cute :]


  • Matthews
    Mar 5, 2011

    Nice avatar ;)


    JoyceSparrows Thanks. I like yours too.
    Mar 5, 2011


  • Snoink
    Mar 5, 2011

    Hi Joyce! How are you doing? :)


    JoyceSparrows I'm doing pretty good right now.
    Mar 5, 2011


    Snoink Yay! How are you liking YWS so far?
    Mar 5, 2011

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    lele253isme
    Mar 3, 2011

    Wind-Rider requests a blog read.


    JoyceSparrows I'm sorry, but I don't know what you are talking about.
    Mar 3, 2011

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    lele253isme I am trying to advertise. I'm sorry if I bothered you.
    Mar 3, 2011


  • canislupis
    Feb 26, 2011

    Hi! Thanks for the review. And I did get the sense that it was a bit confusing when I was writing it. xD Anyway, I shall try to clarify it a bit. Question, if you have time: were the bits with the characters confusing, or the riot part? And do you think I should make the segments longer? Thanks so much again, let me know if you need a review.


    JoyceSparrows I am always glad to give a review! The writing itself is not confusing. I can easily picture what is going on. I think if you added some background information that explains what the problem is, what caused it, etc. the story would make more sense. As for the length of the segments I personally think they are fine. I hope this helps.
    Feb 26, 2011


  • imaginemymind
    Feb 25, 2011

    Hey thanks for the review ! It's really appreciated. Glad you liked it ! (:
    *follows*



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