DeafeningSun
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Check out my story, Losing Love... it has some reviews, but I've fixed it and I want more opinoins.... that word (I think I spelled it wrong) looks like onions.
Haylie Yeah, it's opinions :')
Jul 30, 2011
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Thanks again for the review, I honestly thought no one would like it.
Best Wishes!
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Thank you for your kind words on Bikes and Books! If you have any questions about dialogue, I'd be happy to help you! And your welcome, I liked your story. *follow back*
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No problem! I'm glad I could leave a good review
And the past tense thing wasn't confusing for me. The only thing that confused me was how someone else thought you switched a lot (When you didn't) XP
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Thanks for the review. Yes, it was completely true - even the conversation and phone calls.
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Jun 3, 2017