Young Writers Society

Have a happy birthday stranger!

happy birthday!

Hey,! I really liked that piece of yours, just noticed I had forgotten to say it anywhere.

Thanks for the follow. Is there anything you'd like me to review for you?

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it. There was a reason for the point of view shift (I wanted to stress the boy's individuality, and how it is being snuffed by the society he lives in, sort of) but I also hear your confusion/annoyance at it. I'll see what I can do.

Thanks again!

Thanks for all the comments! It's a nice feeling, knowing that people enjoy what you write. ^^
P.S. Welcome to YWS!

Welcome to YWS, Blade! Any questions, don't hesitate to PM me

Lavvi

Welcome to YWS! :{D