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MiaParamore Done! Tell me when you need more.
Apr 9, 2011
parigirle Thanks a lot for the grreat review! (: It helped a lot.
Apr 10, 2011
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So I totally disappeared for the past few months.. back though, and hoping to be active again ^_^
MiaParamore Welcome back!
Apr 9, 2011
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Hey Pari! I'm Evi. I've been noticing your epically in-depth reviews and just wanted to drop by to welcome you to the site. If you ever need anything or have any question feel free to ask!
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parigirle Awh, haha, I'm not done yet :3 But I'm glad you liked what I posted so far. x)
Jan 18, 2011
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Hey Pari. I just saw your reviews here and there, and they were good. Welcome to YWS, BTW!
...Do you know the meaning of 'pari'? Oo
parigirle Hi~ Thank you very much! (: And yes, angel/fairy. I'm Indian, actually, though I live in Canada :3
Jan 17, 2011
MiaParamore Yay! Another Indian. Me, too!
I can't express my happiness when I see Indian writers here-not much, I'd say.
Jan 18, 2011
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thanks for your review! sorry I pushed Nina in on you, but I'm thinking of making her ghost do SOMETHING so ya know I wanted to introduce her, just in case
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parigirle I'll get to it as soon as I have time. Thanks for telling me!(:
Jan 13, 2011
LadySpark no problems
Jan 14, 2011
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Hey there, Pari! Thanks so much for your review. And no, you were very helpful! I'll edit it as soon as I get back home
I'm still at school
parigirle No problem!(: I'm glad I was able to help.
Jan 12, 2011
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okay thanks for your review! and things are really going to heat up during the 6-8th ch. Ava MIGHT realize she loves Kevin and MIGHT almost kiss him and they MIGHT be captured and they MIGHT be given a gift from the necromancer... Just Maybe..
parigirle I can't wait to read themm!
Jan 12, 2011
LadySpark XD, their being really difficult. They don't want to be written
Jan 13, 2011
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Thanks for the review! It totally helped a lot -- I will have something editing going on for "Away". So, yes, Charles is schizohprenic. What I'm hoping to make a bit clearer is that Lily is real, but soon she becomes but a vision to him when the real Lily leaves. So ... yeah. I'm glad you figured out she was a delusion though!
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Thanks!))) Your review is really helpful! I can't believe your 14 My favourite story is "faithful friends" "Decisions" was a very quick write. I barely looked it over
TheReader22 I'm going to change them around a bit and edit it on YWS. Thanks again!
Jan 8, 2011
parigirle You're welcome!(:
Jan 8, 2011
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parigirle I'll look at it as soon as I have time. :3
Jan 7, 2011
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Hey thank you for the comment, you've made some really good points and I will certainly bare what you have said in mind as I want to better my skills
I will try expanding it and do a possible editing in the near future!
parigirle You're welcome(: Good luck!
Jan 7, 2011
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