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leebass

  • Ah you're welcome! I'm glad it helped.


  • Hannah
    Dec 13, 2010

    Leebas! I'm sorry I didn't get to your piece yet. :( I'm finishing up my semester so I was working on final drafts all weekend. Do you still need a review? :3 Just let me know, and I think I can get to it this weekend or maybe even tomorrow.

  • No problem!

    I've replied back. ^_^


  • leebass
    Dec 11, 2010

    Just realised you can use 'Sort by Time' to see a person's newest work.
    Duhhhh

  • Hi! I will give you your review as soon as possible! Hopefully I will be able to finish it today, but if not then you should have it by tomorrow. I hope. ^.^


    leebass Ah amazing, thanks a lot!
    Dec 11, 2010

  • Sure! I'll get to it soon... preferably tomorrow because it's 1am right now. xD

  • Thanks for the review, Lee! :)

    I'm glad you liked my story. I was a little unsure about the title, so I'm happy that you liked it. I know what you mean by not really writing about anything new as well. If I do decide to continue it as a novel, I'll hopefully be able to put my own spin on things with plenty of twists.

    Thanks again! If you ever need anything reviewed, just let me know.


  • Button
    Dec 8, 2010

    Thanks so much for the review! Yeah.. I really have a hard time switching up vocabulary for the different perspectives. Mia had actually started out at the younger sibling and I had to change it. I wanted to keep her young to accentuate her ferocity as a little kid. :)
    Anyways- I think I'll continue with it. :)
    Thanks again. c:
    -Coral-


  • TheWalkinDude
    Dec 7, 2010

    No prob, dude! I thought your story was pretty interesting, just had a few kinks that needed to be worked out. The ending was good, but I still think that somewhere you should incorporate the bologna sandwich more and maybe even the wrench. But, those are just my opinions. It's still a good story with just the grammar fixes and such.


  • ziggiefred
    Dec 7, 2010

    Thanks for taking time to review my story.


  • Trident
    Nov 23, 2010

    Absolutely!


  • carbonCore
    Nov 21, 2010

    Holy crap, thanks for the link. This guy's something else. Love it!


  • carbonCore
    Nov 21, 2010

    Sweet avatar!


  • Tigersprite
    Nov 21, 2010

    Oh okay thanks for the explanation. I changed that part now anyway because of Jai's review; now she drinks a lot.


    leebass Ok, no worries :)
    Nov 21, 2010


    Tigersprite :D Now following you!
    Nov 21, 2010


  • Angela
    Nov 19, 2010

    Thank you very much for your review on my story 'Reflection On A Failed Friendship'. I'm absolutely rubbish at finding and eliminating unneccesary words. Thanks again!


    leebass Hey, no problem.
    Nov 20, 2010



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