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Leebas! I'm sorry I didn't get to your piece yet.
I'm finishing up my semester so I was working on final drafts all weekend. Do you still need a review? :3 Just let me know, and I think I can get to it this weekend or maybe even tomorrow.
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Hi! I will give you your review as soon as possible! Hopefully I will be able to finish it today, but if not then you should have it by tomorrow. I hope. ^.^
leebass Ah amazing, thanks a lot!
Dec 11, 2010
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Thanks for the review, Lee!
I'm glad you liked my story. I was a little unsure about the title, so I'm happy that you liked it. I know what you mean by not really writing about anything new as well. If I do decide to continue it as a novel, I'll hopefully be able to put my own spin on things with plenty of twists.
Thanks again! If you ever need anything reviewed, just let me know.
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Thanks so much for the review! Yeah.. I really have a hard time switching up vocabulary for the different perspectives. Mia had actually started out at the younger sibling and I had to change it. I wanted to keep her young to accentuate her ferocity as a little kid.
Anyways- I think I'll continue with it.
Thanks again. c:
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No prob, dude! I thought your story was pretty interesting, just had a few kinks that needed to be worked out. The ending was good, but I still think that somewhere you should incorporate the bologna sandwich more and maybe even the wrench. But, those are just my opinions. It's still a good story with just the grammar fixes and such.
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Oh okay thanks for the explanation. I changed that part now anyway because of Jai's review; now she drinks a lot.
leebass Ok, no worries
Nov 21, 2010
TigerspriteNow following you!
Nov 21, 2010
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Thank you very much for your review on my story 'Reflection On A Failed Friendship'. I'm absolutely rubbish at finding and eliminating unneccesary words. Thanks again!
leebass Hey, no problem.
Nov 20, 2010
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Dec 19, 2010