fruityfortissimo
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fruityfortissimo Stupid unhealthy foods.....why must the things that taste the best destroy you?
Sep 20, 2011
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Hey girl! thanks for the comment/Love on my poem! and my wall! haha no way you a Star Wars fan?!!!?
fruityfortissimo Star Wars, Star Trek, Harry Potter, Pirates, Lord of the Rings, Marvel Movies....haha I'm just a ginat nerd!
When I was like 5 to 12 I was OBSESSED with Star Wars haha
Sep 14, 2011
SteppinRazor HAHA No way! I'm OBSESSED with Star Wars I think Harrison Ford is hot I'm buying 3 Star Wars shirts as I type haha. Marvel Movies! I love all the x-men movies! I wanna save cash and buy them all! damn I still haven't seen first class! ugh! I liked star trek:next generation! will wheaton had something to do wit that
haha The punisher was awesome! this is great your my awesome nerd marvel/star trek/star wars nerdy sista!
Sep 14, 2011
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fruityfortissimo No problem!
Sep 14, 2011
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fruityfortissimo No problem!
Sep 14, 2011
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Chapter 7 girl! Things gonna get hot! Hope you like it I just LOVED writing it, you'll see why ;}
fruityfortissimo BUTTERFLIES!!!! Anxious to read!
Sep 13, 2011
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HEEEEY! I know Team Melina! although I secretly am starting to love Leon *looks around* ssshe don't tell her! haha thanks for your review! and aw damn! And I WAS PROOFREADING ! but wow I can't believe that dialogue escaped my eye! gaah!
SteppinRazor P.S I changed that whole line here is what I wrote instead :"You are just beautiful my girl." her light green eyes brightened, "You seem perfect for my son, please don't go breaking his heart." She finished looking hopeful. what do you think?
Sep 12, 2011
fruityfortissimo That's really good it's absolutely perfect! ...and I'm kind of on Leon's side too....hahaha can't wait to read more!
Sep 13, 2011
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FRUUUUUUUUUUUUITY! Love the banana... it reminds me of something. O.o oh yeah... thanks for the comment!
fruityfortissimo JAAAAAASSSHHHY! No problemo and my banana is the mexican peanut butter jelly time banana!
Sep 12, 2011
Jashael OHYEAHOHYEA!
Sep 13, 2011
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Thanks so much! I loved your review and I think it helped a lot! P.S.- LOVE YOUR BANANA!!!!! Haha.
fruityfortissimo Your welcome and thank you! banana loves you too!
Sep 12, 2011
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fruityfortissimo COOL!!!!!!
Sep 11, 2011
fruityfortissimo Oh and your avvie is adorable. just saying
Sep 11, 2011
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Okay. I freaking LOVE Star Trek referances....TO any fellow Trekkies...Live long and prosper!!
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You know...I really LOVE your dancing banana! I can;t help but just keep watching him shake it hahaha
fruityfortissimo RIGHT?!?!? Oh yeah! B)
Sep 11, 2011
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Thanks!!! I think chapter 6 is gonna be a wow! although I know that I need alot of detail work but I think i've gotten the least bit better. your so awsome thank you for your critique I take everything you say into consideration.
fruityfortissimo No problem girl! just keep it up!
Sep 11, 2011
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HEY! Thanks for all of you lovely reviews! They really got me thinking about the dialogue I can see how it would be confusing, so I'll try and fix it! Thank you again so much and since you love it so much I'm posting Chapter 5 in dedication to you =}
SteppinRazor p.s I'm sorry again for the dialogue I don't have much time on the net to fix stuff I just write and try to edit a bit but anyways sorry in advance for my bad dialogue writing lol
Sep 11, 2011
fruityfortissimo Hey! Its absolutely no problem I really enjoy your writing and figure we all like to know what to improve on! or maybe thats just me haha but yeah anytime you want me to look at something just let me know and I'll review the crap out of it haha
Sep 11, 2011
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Sep 20, 2011