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  • BluesClues
    Feb 2, 2023

    Okay here is my very first review on YWS

    I really like this! It kind of made me laugh, but it also kind of made me go, Oh, the poor little eraser dog!!! It's a very original idea, and I hope you don't mind if I say it was a cute poem. The language use was great. I also like how you made a serious point - whether intentionally or unintentionally - about the fact that someone always suffers when mistakes are made. And a further reading-into (aka dissection like we do in English class ALL THE TIME) could bring up a message about animal abuse, although I personally like to just enjoy poems, not dissect them.

    All in all, I think this is a great poem, and I hope to see more like it. You're very creative!


    (Ngl I am highkey shocked how much this still sounds like the way I talk today, although I would probably give slightly more constructive feedback these days lol.)

    #truthordare #socialmonth


    Quillfeather If that was my review I woulda been 3-4
    Feb 2, 2023


    BluesClues ...okay I admit I've been staring at this comment for ages and I. am not sure what you mean XD is that...a good thing? a bad thing? a neutral thing? I do not know.
    Feb 2, 2023


    Quillfeather I just mean I feel very young now XD because I would have been like a 4 year old at the time of 2010 when this review was written
    (My wording has taken a really hit this week I sware I can never say what I mean and I don't even know why)
    Feb 2, 2023


    BluesClues I would say "I feel very old now," but I feel very old on this site all the time, which is why I'm the site grandma XD

    (No but that's okay about your wording. I always say, I'm out of words because I used them all on my writing. So I definitely have times like that too <3)
    Feb 2, 2023



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