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  • Yuriiko
    Dec 29, 2010

    Happy Birthday! :D


  • RacheDrache
    Dec 29, 2010

    Happy Birthday!

    YWS now says you're 18.

    It's still only 11:50 according to Alfred.

    Weirdness.


    RacheDrache ...Whoops, that's supposed to say 11:59.
    Dec 29, 2010


  • Yuriiko
    Dec 27, 2010

    Thank you very much for the review. But one thing though, the second POV in my story actually uses "you" to dictate the main character's actions. Not really using it for readers be doing the action. Hope you understand. ^^


    DissolvedIntoCoffee Okay! That's understandable. :)

    Them second person perspectives. Always throw me off.

    I'm sorry if that totally negated a massive chunk of my review! I feel like I should go elaborate now...

    Dec 27, 2010


    Yuriiko No please! And I'm sorry for confusing you. lol
    Dec 27, 2010


  • DissolvedIntoCoffee
    Dec 27, 2010

    Two page novel summary? Oy.

  • Hey, thanks for the review, Dissolved. :)

    You didn't have to do it! xD Thanks a bunch though. When I get to editing the first part again, I'll definitely take what you advised into consideration.

    Be sure to let me know anytime you need a review on anything. :)


    DissolvedIntoCoffee No problem. :D I wanted to!
    Dec 27, 2010

  • Sorry for the randomness, and I'm not stalking you, honestly, but you write really good reviews. I was just stalking looking at some of them. I'm here to give you a high five because of their epicness.

    *High fives*

    Woop!


    DissolvedIntoCoffee That's not creepy at all-- it's really nice! =D Thank you!

    *high fives back*

    Dec 27, 2010


    Sins Hehe :)
    Dec 27, 2010


  • RacheDrache
    Nov 10, 2010

    I sees yous onlines


  • RacheDrache
    Nov 9, 2010

    Thank you for managing to explain everything I was trying to explain and didn't manage to explain. All negotiations shall be left to you in the future.


  • RacheDrache
    Nov 7, 2010

    I need your help on the Character vs. Plot Driven thread. Get yourself over there!


  • Tigersprite
    Nov 3, 2010

    Thanks for the review (I know it was a few days ago; sorry about the lateness)! Yeah, I was waiting for someone to pick up on the Afghan war and African colonization thing. Actually, the latter was where I got the chaining-slaves-to-others-who-speak-different-languages thing.

    And thanks about the nitpicks, when I have time on Saturday or something I'll definitely flesh out the diary. I think the problem is I only decided it would be a diary about half-way through the story.

    Thanks! :smt003

    TIGERSPRITE


  • DissolvedIntoCoffee
    Nov 1, 2010

    NANOWRIMO! YEE-HA!


  • RacheDrache
    Oct 29, 2010

    Boo!


  • DissolvedIntoCoffee
    Aug 25, 2010

    The big empty space under my desk has been taken up by textbooks. D:
    At least there aren't as many as last year...


  • tori1234
    Aug 21, 2010

    I just like coffe. :D And yes, we shall get along very well. :)


  • Elinor
    Aug 20, 2010

    Thanks for the review on my story! 'Tis much appreciated.

    It wasn't a prompt--The idea just sort of fell into my head, I guess.



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