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Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you like my story so far. I'm hoping to post the rest of chapter one soon, but I'm already on "part three" and I don't want to make five or six parts out of chapter one alone. So I'm still working on it, and hopefully a few more pages will do it. Thanks again!
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thatboy Oh, Hi, Gheala!
Sorry, I've been busy lately and not had much of a chance to come on, or do any writing, unfortunately.
I am determined to carry on with either the Empire novel or/and The short-ish story about the man by the pool (the letter has a lot more meaning behind it and is therapeutic, but that does kind of mean that I can only write it when I'm in a certain mood, if you know what I mean?)
Thanks for checking what I was up to.
If you let me know of any pieces you've added, I'll try and find time to have a look and review
Hoping you're all right
-thatboy
Jul 26, 2011
thatboy latter* as opposed to 'letter', in the brackets haha
Jul 26, 2011
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Thank you! Thank you for getting my hopes up! You know what? Even though it's a little review, it will be very helpful while I write the next scene.
As an answer to your "random" question
I think it's a little more than 1/4 of the novel. Yup, I'm omitting many many scenes that I've already written. Many chapters!
thatboy Not a problem.
And I'm happy for you, I've never gotten that far with a novel, well done
Jun 14, 2011
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Remember the last excerpt you read? I rewrote! I made Jude guilty and added a few reactions that I'll let you read without me ruining them. When you have time, I'll HONORED if you take a look.
thatboy Haha, OK, I'll have a look over it, now that I have all day to myself,
Jun 13, 2011
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Congrates for finishing exams!! Finally -.- They took ages, didn't they? Lol
Yes, yes. Start writing as soon as you could, but after your hand stop hurting from holding the pen so much in exams. My hand used to ache, as though someone was standing on it 24/7. Pain! :O
What do you mean composing, man? Music?
thatboy Yeah!! I compose music, don't know whether you'll be into it, it's mostly classical and film scores. Here's my YouTube channel anyway:
http://www.youtube.com/user/MagixMusicM ... ature=mhee
You'll also find some tracks I did for the Empire novel, too.
Jun 13, 2011
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thatboy hahaha. That actually made me laugh, well done
how are you?
Jun 10, 2011
Gheala Good! It meant to be funny. ;D
How am I? I'm great! Dude, when did you tell me you'll finish those exams? I wanna read something sophisticated already! -.-
Jun 10, 2011
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Oh, I read the review! Thank you! They were believable? AND you felt sad for Aurora? My God! You just made me very very happy. I edited the end though. It turned out that Jude was TOO harsh, so I added a page of him starting to feel guilty.
I got a molar filling and it still hurts to drink cold stuff. -.^ Dunno if that's normal. How about your dentist?
thatboy It went ok, although I was supposed to have an x-ray of my mouth for future purposes, but their computer broke, so got to go back :/
And I think it is normal for it to hurt for a couple of days,
get better soon. And keep writing!!
Jun 7, 2011
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Oh, finally! D< You haven't written anything in ages. I'll get to it as soon as possible!
Hm.. I wrote something else as well. It isn't the crime scene (I already finished that and it's in ink and needs to be TYPED!) But it's another scene between Jude and Rory.
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Let's review each other ^^ Oh. You can take all the time you want, by the way. Hope you're studying well!
thatboy OK
I'll get on it after school tomorrow, got to study for maths today; pain in the backside :/
Jun 5, 2011
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How could I ever thank you? Thank you so much for hat beautiful review! You got my hopes up and made me so happy. Especially when you liked the earthquake metaphor
Tell me once you post something. I need to return this amazing favor!
thatboy I'll let you know when I post something new, but trust me, it's me who's returning the favor.
I'm glad you liked the review, I hope it was better than the last one I gave you.
Take care
May 22, 2011
Gheala The last one was good a well. You obviously don't know how helpful you are with those amazing reviews.
Study well, but don't be too hard on yourself.
May 22, 2011
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thatboy Thank you very much. It's appreciated.
May 23, 2011
qaralynn are you done with them?
May 23, 2011
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All writing has been put on a pause due to a shed load of exams in the next few weeks :/
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thatboy HAha, good doin' business with ya!!
May 2, 2011
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Just found a film, Finding Forrester.
It was great!! Haha, great story line.
Just thought I'd let you all know.
Gheala Amazing movie, right?? It's my favourite, after Freedom Writers.
I just love movies about writing.
Apr 27, 2011
thatboy Yep, great movie. I loved it
Apr 28, 2011
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Hellos! Sorry for the delayed response, but I didn't have internet connection for a couple of days. I'll review the chapter as soon as possible. I'll make it a very long one
thatboy Haha, it's not a problem and I look forward to my long review
Apr 25, 2011
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