thegirlandthepen
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Pundit I've read it now. I want to see where it goes. I like it. (oh, I'm talking about Heal)
Nov 3, 2010
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The first four chapters of 'Heal.' are up, hopefully this is only the beginning
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AngerManagement Me! I'm going to do it, and I kind of have a plot. Maybe this time I'll finish it.
Aug 24, 2010
thegirlandthepen Good for you perhaps we'll spur each other on. I really want to carry on with Heal, but as I've wrote about 20 pages already I'm not sure thats allowed :S
Aug 24, 2010
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Re-edit of 'Heal.' is up, and I've got a question on there for all of you. Would most appreciate if you checked it out viewtopic.php?t=66814
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I could use a review. Could you please chck out my story? It's the only one I have besides the prologe considering I'm new. And happy late birthday!
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Sorry I've been AWOL guys! It was my 18th birthday yesterday so busy, messy times. I'm back on the road to recovery though! Hands up if you want a review?
MiaParamore Hey Dannie..Happy belated birthday..
Jul 15, 2010
thegirlandthepen Aww thanks but who's Dannie?
Jul 15, 2010
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thank you for the review and i see your point and the thing about the full stop this is what i am actually writing so i had to stop because i didn thave much other than that to put down
grateful and excepting of further help
-dragons
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hi im dragons and i would like to know if you would like to review my first forum for me if you would like to then it is called title unknown it might just be the first one you see but im just trying to help
happy to help and be helped
-dragons
thegirlandthepen No problem, all done.
Jul 10, 2010
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Hahaha Luscious/Carlisle, same difference. You know, father figures.
And ah dearie! There isn't going to be any more
I just wrote it as a short story, I would screw it up if I tried to add more. Trust me, been there, done that. I hate killing characters, so when I do I usually try to keep writing when I could've (usually should've) stopped the story just to patch up any heartbreak on the part of the other characters.
But not all stories can have happy endings, ya know?
Pundit Unhappy endings are good
Jul 11, 2010
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America is cloudy and cold. xD Seriously, you don't want to come here right now, haha.
Drawers I'm sorry to creep, but seriously girl, I want to live wherever in America you live. Because where I am, it's been like 34545646 degrees for the past week. Consider yourself blessed.
Jul 10, 2010
thegirlandthepen Thats okay, because I'm not coming til next year..Whereabouts are you anyway Kaedee? In a very non-creepy way. xD
Jul 10, 2010
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Thank you so much for your review!
And yes, you were quite right. They were indeed mistakes, not misunderstandings. I do have a reason though! hahaha.
You see, I had started writing that story a looooooooong time ago (like the beginning of this year), and yesterday I found it on my computer and read it and really like it, so I decided to keep going with it. Unfortunately, I had forgotten that I had already established certain things in the first bit that I wrote a while back, such as the main character's name. And then I also didn't proofread it before I posted it here.
Editing is taking place momentarily.
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Oct 28, 2010