This is a story that I won contest with, but I never got any comments on it so tell me what you think please!!
Thanks
By the way, it's not really spaced because it's only one paragraph
I lied. I went and spaced it out.
I slipped through my house, carefully avoiding the creaky parts of the old wooden flooring. I’ve discovered that if I step on the knots in the wood, the squeaks are minimized. As I arrived at the window that I usually escaped from, I looked outside at the gorgeous scenery. After the light snowfall of the past afternoon the world outside was a virgin white. The top layer of the snow drifted lightly on the breeze, swirling and swirling, like tiny spirits going where they pleased on this uncanny full moon. In anticipation I could feel all my muscles and limbs tighten, but I still had to wait a little bit longer, after all, if I changed in the house there might be a bit of a ruckus. I eased open the window and lowered myself onto the roof just below. After I lowered the window until it was mostly closed, I turned and leapt off the roof, landing lightly on all fours. Such a fall meant nothing to a werewolf, so I silently ran into the fields that were outside my house.
After swiftly surpassing all the fields I entered the forest directly west of my house and gratefully removed my clothes. My body had been aching in anticipation all day for this. Every muscle in my body clenched again and this time I let myself free to it. The hair on my entire body grew and turned a deep auburn as my nails formed claws. I felt my fangs pierce my lower lip before my face started to lengthen and become a canine snout. My bones popped into different positions and I fell onto all fours.
After a few more minutes the change was complete. I ran in circles joyfully until I slipped in the fresh snow. Then I carefully leapt to my feet, and sat still staring at the luminous moon. Suddenly I felt the urge to scare surrounding animals…if they hadn’t already discovered my scent. I bayed at the moon, the sonorous howl of a wolf, and from miles away I heard a faint reply with my exceptionally sensitive ears. We howled at each other, the call of two lone wolves who, unusually, enjoyed their solitude. Then the wind shifted and the scent of a rabbit blew into my nostrils.
I bounded into action. The rabbit was close, I could smell it! The musky scent mixed with- yes it knew I was out here too. I could smell the fear that radiated from it like heat from a stove. I skidded to a halt when I passed a set of fresh rabbit tracks and set off in the new direction. I chased is through the forest, this rabbit is good at avoiding me! But eventually I caught it and the hunt was complete. I spent the night in the forest, enjoying myself and the advantages of this body. All too soon, I had to return home. I changed back into human form and made my way back to my house.
When I reached my den…home, I climbed up a trellis on my wall and slipped back through the slightly ajar window. I crept back into my room and after I curled into a ball in my bed, I tried to place myself back in my human frame of mind. I had to stop thinking as a wolf and get some sleep. I wanted to dream of running and hunting, but I made myself think of school, and friends and homework. My eyes begin to close, and I anticipate a normal day tomorrow, with my secret forever hidden…
so...ya!
