Quillfeather wrote:
Five days into Napo Week! Ooh it's getting spooky in here!
Todays poem comes from a wonderful poet doing there very first napo event! Today we are highlighting @theromanticchemist poem in their thread rereading what i used to be All the poems in the thread are amazing and you should definitely take a look!
However the Poem that most caught my attention was the third poem in the thread. It's incredibly descriptive and imagagintive wording and almost wistful tone. The feeling of desperation almost to the point of hopelessness is tangible.
Just read this first stanzathis morning i breathed in the chilly fall air as if it was my last—
left the world behind as i stared at the cloud my breath made. i wish not to be in real life,
there are better places to be. perhaps in my mind. perhaps in yours.
maybe if i lose myself in my own thoughts for long enough i’ll cross yours.
I absolutely love the first words and how /real/ and tangible they feel.
I am absolutely loving everyone's poetry so far! Lets finish out these last two days strong!
#NaPoWeek #NaPo2024
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EXCUSE ME?? Thank you so much Quill!! <333
Oct 30, 2024
There have been so many great poems this week, it was hard to choose just one for today’s PCrew Pick!
But I really loved @Elektra’s poem today — her theme has been around the stages of grief presented through the imagery of space and astronomy. Her poem “Acceptance” is a super neat looking visual poem!
One of my favorite lines is:
But as much of the words of the poem itself, I LOVE the way it’s presented in an image! It’s super creative.
Check it out here!
#NaPoWeek #NaPo2024