Hi there! I've never reviewed before, so excuse any mistakes I might make! ^^ The first paragraph reminds me of Richard Siken , more specifically his poetry in the book ...

Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed your piece has been in the green room for a while, so I decided to give it a review to bump ...

@EditorAndPerks I think you are up next with Hamish's post

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I think that should be fine @QuoolQuo.

His heart raced like a million fluttering wings. Maybe this was the one. Maybe they’d finally be able to get away from this hell on earth.

The feeling of everything you should have said but didn't burning a hole in your heart.

Hi YourFriendQuirks08, Mailice here with a short review! :D Most of the poems I've read always have this underlying sadness or happiness in them, trying to make the reader either ...

Hi there :D Quick typo or/and grammar mistakes list: They have come with there "with their" Pollution and machines There houses and roads again, "their houses" But now were are ...

Hi illy7896 and Haileyg21! Mailice here with a short review! :D I just sat down and read through the rest of the chapters to be up to date and I ...

Hi there :D Well that's one hell of a way to start a short story xD I want to write a bit of what I think about this short, having ...

Hi TheFinalFighter32632, Mailice here with a short review! :D A very exciting story you present here, which I don't think needs much development plot-wise. Firstly, as it's only the first ...

A game of one-man-hide and seek gone horribly wrong

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here....back to review this chapter as well...let's dive point waiting around...knowing just have sad this

Hi CreativeUsername! Mailice here with a short review! :D First of all, please tag me when the next chapter comes out. I really like the story so far. I like ...

Hey! First of all, I love the whole idea of an Avengers fanfic. This may just be the secret ingredient that will heal the world.