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What a waste of wings!
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by driver in Poetry » General

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  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General

    Hello, amelie! VegasLights here to give you a review! I loved the theme throughout your poem. But I don't understand how the title matches the poem, if you could please ...

    VegasLights - 13 minutes ago

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    amelie - 29 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Catching the Silence.

    Okay so let me start off with, hello welcome to the site! Okay now to the review, don't want to discourage you because trust me. . .YOU are a good ...

    Ineedy0u - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Liz + Zac (6.1)

    Okay, I kinda took longer than I should've for this one. Oops. On the bright side, the reason for that is because uni revision is actually not going as horrendously ...

    Sins - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic
    Inner Demons

    Kara! Biggest whine out of the way: "When you hit someone / they die from a death." TWITCH. TWITCH. ANIME TWITCH. I will admit that I had a bit of ...

    Lumi - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Dramatic, Fantasy
    "Shattered Crowns" in depth synopsis

    There are issssssssssssssssues here. First off, you're likely to suffer from what I want to call "Telescope Syndrome." This means that you've plotted in such detail into so far into ...

    Lumi - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Gossip Girl DT

    I'm good with it. It would be a better point for Henry to jump in. Something that he gets invited to.

    XxXTheSwordsmanXxX - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Dramatic, Fantasy
    "Shattered Crowns" in depth synopsis

    Wow, it seems like you've thought out your world really well, using details from the real world as inspiration. However, my primary impression right now is that there are so ...

    BlueAfrica - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Pokémon Sun/Moon (Games)

    Released in the traditional fourth quarter of 2016, Pokemon Sun and Moon brought the Pokemon universe into an entirely new scope with more new features than most people want to ...

    Lumi - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    The Prince of Ackerly Shade Chapter 1 Part 1

    Whoa, what a cliffhanger. I'm curious about your world. Specifically, I'm curious about whether humans actually know about all this magic stuff going on directly around them or if they ...

    BlueAfrica - 4 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 1

    (only contains the b-word) Juno is a new girl at Ebbswick Academy. Margo hasn't met her yet but the rumors are quite interesting.

    primadonna - 5 hours ago
    18+ Language

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    New vs Old and Loyal

    Hey Aubrey! HarshLynx here for a review! Just a heads up, I'll be typing my review as I read so it might read weird or contradict itself. The first thing ...

    HarshLynx - 5 hours ago

  • Forums » Poetry Discussion
    Flow. Someone please reveal to me this mystery!

    @Willard always says my flow is weird

    spectator - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 5.2

    Hello again! This was a pretty good chapter (part), overall. These critiques are partly scrounging around in the dirt, and partly just things I noticed that seemed odd/off from the ...

    Snazzy - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic

    This is a really good poem! It might be short but in the world of art, that doesn't mean anything. The emotion is what's important in poetry because that's what ...

    HarshLynx - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic
    Inner Demons

    First time reviewing lyrics of any sort, so let's give it a shot! There's immediately a glaring issue in my way. I don't know how it's meant to be read. ...

    LeutnantSchweinehund - 5 hours ago

My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew