Young Writers Society

Wow, this poem is awesome. Every line in this poem is explaining how the author is really feeling. "The stillness is too loud, The idleness rings in my ears. Though, ...

A family party at a postmodern house. A pleading ex and a handsome stranger. A recipe for success? Hopefully.

William wakes up somewhere strange.

Hello hello! Ranger here to leave a quick review if you don’t mind! Right off the bat I would like to say I greatly enjoyed reading this! I love the ...

Rose is called to deal with evil in another country.

(it’s being continued 2 years later omg thank y’all. I wanted this to be continued so bad) The children who died are ghosts. They wander what used to be the ...

@AkiraEliza whilst there's no rule against posting here, this is technically Midnight's hello thread xD You're welcome to post your own or to post here: Anyway, welcome back!

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William comes across Roman and displays more of ...

Yes, they're all so good!! I'm really loving the vibes

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: from the title I am guessing that we will be in a dream that someone is having ...

DAY 5 GREEDINESS DOESN'T MAKE YOU RICH I am important as you are, so we can stop this war. why do you have to be so mean? don't read the ...

im petty on main

It's really good! I like the metaphors that you use to describe the pain the girl is going through. Some sentences felt like they were running sentences. So maybe break ...

It's fine lol!

Sadie nodded, satisfied. "They are pretty phish-y. Chaos goblin. But does good work." @Shady

To be honest, if your goal was to rhyme like the last line, you did a bad job this time but it's fine it's not like it's a crime the ...