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Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room
by HarryHardy in Short Story » Humor


maybe the raindrops will break the windshield
by SilverNight in Poetry » General


Fall.
by AilahEvelynMae in Poetry » General


To the Boy I Haven't Met Yet
by averyismediocre in Poetry » General


Eleanor *Novel in Progress* PROLOGUE
by ADream in Novel / Chapter » General


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  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Satire
    Boss Girl

    Forever here with a review!! Boss girl might not be the best title for the story. Think of something else. Maybe something like a thief girl or the girl without ...

    ForeverYoung299
    ForeverYoung299 - 16 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Oliver Stone - Prologue

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, I NEVER imagined stepping through ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Literature, General
    Ch 10: The poem competition: concealment of the truth

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Hm, well this was an interesting scene here. ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Writers Corner
    do not judge strictly

    On dampened paper I sketch words in Chinese ink, where trees, transparent and bare, live in a snowy ravine, their birds in the south, their leaves under snow, their branches ...

    kevinvholloman
    kevinvholloman - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic
    Knightingale

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I would just tell to seperate the author's note from the rest of the story. Format it into italics and add A/N: in the ...

    ForeverYoung299
    ForeverYoung299 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature
    LoaMR: Ch. II: The Intruder 3 (Reworked)

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : OKayy....this is starting to get a little choppy. ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Culture
    Why Do we...?

    Heyy! Forever here with a review!! First of all, what it actually is. Like it doesn't read like a sjort story at all. It reads more like a poem than ...

    ForeverYoung299
    ForeverYoung299 - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Romantic
    somonka: two lovers in winter

    Hi Lim! I'm working through the checklist, and I remembered you like structured poems, so I wanted to drop a review for you :) I really liked this piece! Since ...

    SpiritedWolfe
    SpiritedWolfe - 7 hours ago

  • Forums » Writers Corner
    Plot Bunny Adoption!

    Ahh I want to read that so much lim!

    alliyah
    alliyah - 8 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Dark Hours: The Beginning Chapter 1: Hell Bound

    Follow the story of two destined souls fighting to find their own heaven together. Mattais & Essence.

    Funtimesunshine
    Funtimesunshine - 8 hours ago
    16+ Language Violence Mature Content

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Naked Eye

    A little free verse :)

    pineapple321
    pineapple321 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Fall.

    Hey Ellie! Incoming review!! Wowza this was a fantastic poem. And very direct, I like direct poetry. It's a nice change from the stuff I've been reviewing this month. Let's ...

    FireEyes
    FireEyes - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Horror, General
    Death was bound to come

    Hey! Forever here with a review! It seemed like everyone in the valley, though, was going inside their shacks earlier than they should have The construction here feels a bit ...

    ForeverYoung299
    ForeverYoung299 - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction
    Gracing the Graffiti

    Hey there, and happy RevMo! Plume here, with a review! I enjoyed this piece! I think you have a really interesting concept here; it was quite fun to read about ...

    Plume
    Plume - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    My Brother James

    Hi there, Icy here with a super quick late night review. I really like the imagery you have at the start of this! It's good for drawing the reader in ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The Stinging Tang

    Cool poem! I believe this is about leaving and the scent of home never leaving favorite parts in the poem were these lines:”The night is gone” and “the waking death” ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 13 hours ago


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge