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Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hey friend! Ellie here with a review. I enjoyed reading through this and wanted to offer some suggestions and interpretations for your story :D scene one : Bedroom] I wonder ...

What happens when you make all the wrong choices even though you know they are wrong?

What happens when you make all the wrong choices even though you know they are wrong?

All right, good set-up, but I have a few issues: 1. I feel like I just got slapped in the face with an infodump in the first paragraph. Given the ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

The Dragon Selection Ceremony is underway! The mysteries of the green gems are revealed at last. Tension mounts as Smolder's fate approaches.

Hey fureameniken, First let me say YMS is starting to change my opinion on poems. Although I'm not a fan, I have already found couple of great ones here. I ...

I'm not a huge fan of poems, but I like yours. This one as well. There is this nostalgic feeling of long lost childhood friend who was more of a ...

Hello, My Friend! Pleasure to meet you, fellow horror writer! I am Raven, and I’d like to review this story opening using my Familiar method today! Let’s dive in, shall ...

The children who died are ghosts. They wander what used to be the school. One of them ate fruit which turned him from human to dragon. Now claws replaced his ...

Hey there! Amaya is back here and ready to review 📚! Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. I’m going to keep it short alright!✨ All ...

Salutations, curious mind! Amaya is back here and ready to review 📚! Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. I’m going to keep it short alright!✨ ...

Lorelei helps Isadora reunite with Rhian, but the ocean waves rise high, and the real threat looms in the corner.

Salutations, curious mind! Amaya is back here and ready to review 📚! Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. I’m going to keep it short alright!✨ ...

Loved your story :) I really like how you paint a clear picture with words in some of the descriptions. Like the car crash. Coming from someone who's never been ...