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The Persona
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General

It Was The Color Of Your Hair
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic

The Moon, The Sun and The Wings
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General

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by VegasLights in Poetry » General

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  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Dramatic
    Yacov Smirnov's Dating Problems

    I like it. In comparison to your other stories, I find it a bit lackluster, but that is just my personal opinion. I do not mean to hurt you. :) ...

    LadyOkra - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic

    Hiya! Space here for a review! I really like the style of the poem--how most lines aren't even two words, making it short, but each word means something different and ...

    SpaceSnickerdoodle - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 9.2

    I'm sorry it's taking so long for me to get these reviews to you. It's getting late where I am and your other story had very little to criticize so ...

    DragonWriter22 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic

    Legacy here for a review. I am so sorry that you feel this way, if you need someone to talk to please message me (I will message asap). I was ...

    Thisislegacy - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Other
    It Was The Color Of Your Hair

    In every friendship, something like this happens. You see your friend as someone who can't be broken and you lean on them so much that it starts to hurt them ...

    CateRose17 - 4 hours ago

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic

    If you understand the meaning of these words, I am deeply sorry...

    CateRose17 - 4 hours ago
    16+ Mature Content

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Eos, Chapter 1: New York

    As promised, here is the review! It was really interesting to read the first part of this after what you'd told me about the story so far. Overall this first ...

    DragonWriter22 - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    My Cheesecake Addiction

    I love this. It was meant to be funny, and I could totally tell. I do share a love for New York Cheescake, but I tend to bury it becuase ...

    SongbirdFatale - 5 hours ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Hello! I'm belvedere.

    @belvedere Cool! I personally haven’t watched Whisper of the Heart, but I guess I should put it on my to-watch list!

    neptune - 5 hours ago

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Seltas's first kill

    This is a story about a girl that lives in a twisted world that has lost both her parents and is raised by her harsh uncle. This is her first kill.

    camusic - 6 hours ago
    12+ Violence

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic

    Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, not least because I have a soft spot for all writing with a sensory bent (by which I mean corporeal imagery), which ...

    belvedere - 6 hours ago

  • Poetry » General, General

    To be disconnected.

    EKK15 - 6 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic

    This is a very intense expression of the frustration felt when we try our best and it just isn’t good enough. We realize that the only one to blame for ...

    Radrook - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic

    Hiya! Space here for a review! I got a lot of different vibes from this poem. You/the protagonist seemed to be talking about some mysterious group of people ("they look ...

    SpaceSnickerdoodle - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Shattered Moons DT

    Posted for Rhyence. ^^

    ScarlettFire - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Shattered Moons

    Amaranth lead the way through what was left of the cavern they resided in, her gauntlet open and revealing a light from Burn Dust, the edges slowly spinning to continue ...

    ScarlettFire - 7 hours ago

Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
— Robert Brault