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Literary Spotlight

The Persona
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General


It Was The Color Of Your Hair
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic


The Moon, The Sun and The Wings
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General


Our Society of Ridicule
by VegasLights in Poetry » General


Hands
by Lake in Poetry » Literature


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  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Dramatic
    Yacov Smirnov's Dating Problems

    I like it. In comparison to your other stories, I find it a bit lackluster, but that is just my personal opinion. I do not mean to hurt you. :) ...

    LadyOkra
    LadyOkra - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    Hiya! Space here for a review! I really like the style of the poem--how most lines aren't even two words, making it short, but each word means something different and ...

    SpaceSnickerdoodle
    SpaceSnickerdoodle - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 9.2

    I'm sorry it's taking so long for me to get these reviews to you. It's getting late where I am and your other story had very little to criticize so ...

    DragonWriter22
    DragonWriter22 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    Legacy here for a review. I am so sorry that you feel this way, if you need someone to talk to please message me (I will message asap). I was ...

    Thisislegacy
    Thisislegacy - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Other
    It Was The Color Of Your Hair

    In every friendship, something like this happens. You see your friend as someone who can't be broken and you lean on them so much that it starts to hurt them ...

    CateRose17
    CateRose17 - 4 hours ago

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    If you understand the meaning of these words, I am deeply sorry...

    CateRose17
    CateRose17 - 4 hours ago
    16+ Mature Content

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Eos, Chapter 1: New York

    As promised, here is the review! It was really interesting to read the first part of this after what you'd told me about the story so far. Overall this first ...

    DragonWriter22
    DragonWriter22 - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    My Cheesecake Addiction

    I love this. It was meant to be funny, and I could totally tell. I do share a love for New York Cheescake, but I tend to bury it becuase ...

    SongbirdFatale
    SongbirdFatale - 5 hours ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Hello! I'm belvedere.

    @belvedere Cool! I personally haven’t watched Whisper of the Heart, but I guess I should put it on my to-watch list!

    neptune
    neptune - 5 hours ago

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Seltas's first kill

    This is a story about a girl that lives in a twisted world that has lost both her parents and is raised by her harsh uncle. This is her first kill.

    camusic
    camusic - 6 hours ago
    12+ Violence

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic
    Hands

    Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, not least because I have a soft spot for all writing with a sensory bent (by which I mean corporeal imagery), which ...

    belvedere
    belvedere - 6 hours ago

  • Poetry » General, General
    Sync

    To be disconnected.

    EKK15
    EKK15 - 6 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic
    Hands

    This is a very intense expression of the frustration felt when we try our best and it just isn’t good enough. We realize that the only one to blame for ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Realistic
    Hands

    Hiya! Space here for a review! I got a lot of different vibes from this poem. You/the protagonist seemed to be talking about some mysterious group of people ("they look ...

    SpaceSnickerdoodle
    SpaceSnickerdoodle - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Shattered Moons DT

    Posted for Rhyence. ^^

    ScarlettFire
    ScarlettFire - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Shattered Moons

    Amaranth lead the way through what was left of the cavern they resided in, her gauntlet open and revealing a light from Burn Dust, the edges slowly spinning to continue ...

    ScarlettFire
    ScarlettFire - 7 hours ago


Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
— Robert Brault