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  • Reviews » Art » Narrative, General
    FORGIVE ME ANGEL 💔

    Hey there ! Here with a review :D This was a really moving piece. I loved the way you presented this incredibly serious yet true topic. It's something not enough ...

    stygianmoon17
    stygianmoon17 - 49 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Connection - 44

    Hey there ! Before I move on analysing this piece, I just saw your synopsis (?) The thing under the title, which says what your story is about. Ok so ...

    stygianmoon17
    stygianmoon17 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Around the World

    Cool poem I love the word play used throughout that justifies the title "Around the World". You use word play and figurative language very well in this to show how ...

    CotardDelusionz
    CotardDelusionz - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    2 - Kate

    Hey there ! Hope you're having a lovely day ! Or night ! Or afternoon ! Or whatever Okay wow ! This was quite a read ! Let's start with ...

    stygianmoon17
    stygianmoon17 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    1 - Kate

    Nice introduction to a series there's nothing much to critique for my personal standards this is good writing to me. Only things I suggest making this part more clear for ...

    CotardDelusionz
    CotardDelusionz - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    Children of the Elements [OOC]

    Thank you ^o^ Also almost forgot to ask this! We need to discuss exactly what each of us can do with our elements? Like what can we do and not ...

    RealSadhours296
    RealSadhours296 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    More

    Very inspiring poem what this poem talks about is something I really struggle with, a feeling of loss and a chaotic or sad self image, the "sense of self". The ...

    CotardDelusionz
    CotardDelusionz - 3 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    Erebus Kingdom

    Hey guys. So as we wait to see if anyone else wants to join please start getting ideas for your posts. Obliviously A Nox chapter will be the first and ...

    Haileyg21
    Haileyg21 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Other, Other
    The Thought

    Hi there! This piece is very beautiful and poetic. There is almost a stream-of-consciousness style about it that really adds to your musings of twilight. Twilight really is such a ...

    PoetryMisfit
    PoetryMisfit - 4 hours ago

  • Forums » Writers Corner
    Old City

    Arcticus
    Arcticus - 4 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    Aether's Heart OOC

    There is now a doodle poll in the discord for the brainstorming session! Please head over to the discord and put the times you would be able and willing to ...

    Omni
    Omni - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Afterlife chapter 5

    Hi Col3, Mailice back with a short review! :D Wow is what I have to say about this. Somehow the story has gone from one extreme to the next and ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Brain Vomit

    Hello! This is quite emotional. 'I become empty' - I'm a little confused by the tense choice here. Has something just happened to make the narrator suddenly empty or do ...

    MissGangamash
    MissGangamash - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Afterlife chapter 4

    Hi Col3, Mailice here with a short review! :D I actually really liked the composition of this chapter. It had a better overview and good structure than the previous one.But ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Narrative, Literature
    Inexorable

    Hello! There's a lot of repetition here. 'Wall' is mentioned 8 times, if I've counted correctly. It makes the piece kinda clunky. Like, we get it, there's a wall. The ...

    MissGangamash
    MissGangamash - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Stuck in Time

    Hello! Okay, lets get into this. The narrative style is very stunted. There is not heart to it, no real sense of who Joseph is. All I know is he ...

    MissGangamash
    MissGangamash - 6 hours ago


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