Rose There sitting in an abandoned mall scavenging for food are 4 kids alone no parents to be seen they all look to be related. One of the three boys ...

Hi NivedaJames! This poem really stood out to me for its descriptions and questions, and I loved the ending idea of "sleep[ing] forever in eternal bliss". I especially liked your ...

This is a poem that deals with the passing of time. You showed us the darker side of that, which is pretty neat, not everything is flowers and joy. The ...

Another poem from my series "Two Kinds of Rain". This one was inspired by a dream of mine and a walk in the rain.

I won't pretend I know much about the issue of suicide. I personally never felt that awful feeling, but this poem gives me a little insight to what that might ...

I love the perspective of a begginer writer this one gives. The language and metaphor is very simple, but I believe that's exactly what makes this one good, you're not ...

This poem started with a very interesting premise. You managed to show death as something beautiful, kinda reminded me of my favourite movie, the Fountain (I cannot recommend it to ...

I really liked this poem. It didn't blow me away with the language or emotion, but you gave me a new perspective at something as simple, as looking into a ...

omg a new chapter already AHHHHHH WAHT The water had reached further than it had the last time the camp had flooded. WHY DO I ALWAYS DO THIS, I saw ...

The first of a series of poems written by me, named after the whole gathering - Two Kinds of Rain.

That was a very interesting story! I loved the details and the ending was dark but also written very well! I think you developed the story very well and I'm ...

After the fives return home things are changing in good and bad ways read on if you want to know more

It's gonna take me a bit to write that post - personal stuff going on - so just wanted to remind y'all that Maggie's little side quest shouldn't detract from ...

Woah. Woah! This is absolutely incredible I am in awe. The prose is airtight. And the characters and their relationships are complex, sophisticated, and what's more, I actually liked them! ...

A poem about how different people can see different things and how mirrors allow people to look at themselves differently.

I cracked up so hard! I adored this. Thanks for posting! Your commentary made it even better (the elbow fetish:) I was actually really surprised by the paragraph: "They looked ...