That was a very interesting story! I loved the details and the ending was dark but also written very well! I think you developed the story very well and I'm ...

After the fives return home things are changing in good and bad ways read on if you want to know more

It's gonna take me a bit to write that post - personal stuff going on - so just wanted to remind y'all that Maggie's little side quest shouldn't detract from ...

Woah. Woah! This is absolutely incredible I am in awe. The prose is airtight. And the characters and their relationships are complex, sophisticated, and what's more, I actually liked them! ...

A poem about how different people can see different things and how mirrors allow people to look at themselves differently.

I cracked up so hard! I adored this. Thanks for posting! Your commentary made it even better (the elbow fetish:) I was actually really surprised by the paragraph: "They looked ...

The world is ending and the only thing Lewis can blame is the scarecrow in his field. (need some objective feedback on this)

Also, I find that I often write from the perspective of a character who is a different gender than me. And because I write in the first person, I was ...

Stars are born and die in the course of life. A 'star' is what defines the world and makes the world take unusual courses. Yet who is a star or ...

Hey, Zekcede here! Thsis is really cute! I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in ...

Hi YOUKNOWWHO and none? :D Mailice here with a short review! :D Let's start with what I noticed while reading: Some words are misspelled with capital letters and others are ...

Hi Plume!! I've browsed through (quite) a few of your works now and ahh I had no idea you wrote scripts and stories too! Somehow that makes me admire you ...

HAH yes it's kind of funny that she stands out with her baggy pants and men's shirt bc she's usually a fashionista (mostly when she's older though) and would probably ...

Riverpaw becomes a medicine cat apprentice.

Wrote this in MomoMajesty's WriterFeedPad...nothing philosophical, just a fancy way of saying bye. :)

Professional Ace Detective Scott Walker gets pitted against a twist of morality, punishment, and truth in this epic detective fiction story. Same DoD.