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  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    The kings eldest child, prologue

    Hiya! Lim here with a short review. First Impressions The story has an ominous atmosphere throughout, like something bad is about to happen, and indeed, bad things do happen! Prince ...

    Liminality
    Liminality - 42 minutes ago

  • Forums » Writing Tips
    How can I be better at POV (with characters)?

    Hey Rivy— first, remember that if someone is following you, then they will see your wall posts— you do not need to @ them every time. We can also see ...

    winterwolf0100
    winterwolf0100 - 53 minutes ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    The Great Team Tortoise Race of 2022

    A Call to Our Brave knights! We enter the last week of this race and we're down to seven brave reviewers. Huzzah! @IcyFlame @Liminality @HarryHardy @Plume @Spearmint @RandomTalks @vampricone6783. Whil

    KotGRCommander
    KotGRCommander - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Through the Poppies

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, My brightly colored wings fluttered ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 3 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    LSS: The Last Word OOC

    Congratulations on finishing your storybook! It has been locked and moved to the Completed Hall of Fame, which means you can no longer post in it, but you CAN go ...

    winterwolf0100
    winterwolf0100 - 16 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    LSS: The Fools' Quest OOC

    Congratulations on finishing your storybook! It has been locked and moved to the Completed Hall of Fame, which means you can no longer post in it, but you CAN go ...

    winterwolf0100
    winterwolf0100 - 16 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Out-of-Character Discussion
    Hkumar, BeingRivy and Friends.

    Hey, Hkumar, Good idea I’ll try to make the characters with the proper POV (point of view?). I’ll do my best. Thank you. Actually I never thought about the characters ...

    BeingRivy
    BeingRivy - 17 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Fantasy, General
    the witch who saw herself as queen

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I really enjoyed reading this poem! The way you described a parental relationship through this sort of fairytale-esque situation was nicely done. Regardless ...

    Plume
    Plume - 17 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General
    Awakening Chapter 25: Recovery

    Hey, mint here with a review! ^-^ I binge-read these last chapters so I'm nearly caught up now... but I think I'll drop off a review here before going on ...

    Spearmint
    Spearmint - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure
    Assassin's Heart - Ch4

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was an incredibly satisfying chapter! There were moments of excitement, moments of ridiculous humor (that scene with the spider had me rolling!) ...

    RandomTalks
    RandomTalks - 19 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    carousel

    Oooh..This was so full of the love and carnival magic! A carousel of toxic love.A tide of saccharine overdose of chocolate hearts.The hearts don’t even taste sweet anymore.They’re just pain ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    In the Dark Wood

    Hello, Sunflower here for a quick review. So I'm just here to answer some of the questions you yourself asked. So as for the first question:Did it make you laugh? ...

    Sunflowerdemon3712
    Sunflowerdemon3712 - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    carousel

    Sunflower here for a quick review! So I liked this poem quite a bit more than I had expected. I liked the flow of the poem it felt very natural, ...

    Sunflowerdemon3712
    Sunflowerdemon3712 - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Make Me

    Heyyy, Rubes here with a review! I really enjoyed the piece and think it was extremely well written. In my reviews I like to pick a few quotes and analyse ...

    YourFriendQuirks08
    YourFriendQuirks08 - 22 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Soil of misery

    Heyyy, Rubes here with a review! I really enjoyed the piece and think it was extremely well written. In my reviews I like to pick a few quotes and analyse ...

    YourFriendQuirks08
    YourFriendQuirks08 - 22 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Iceflame// Chapter 17: The First One

    Hey, just here to leave a quick review after an eternity of absence! Overall, this is a really great chapter to introduce the class battle and the stakes at hand. ...

    VengefulReaper
    VengefulReaper - 24 hours ago


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites