Young Writers Society

It's really good! I like the metaphors that you use to describe the pain the girl is going through. Some sentences felt like they were running sentences. So maybe break ...

It's fine lol!

Sadie nodded, satisfied. "They are pretty phish-y. Chaos goblin. But does good work." @Shady

To be honest, if your goal was to rhyme like the last line, you did a bad job this time but it's fine it's not like it's a crime the ...

Hello, hello! Finally getting around to my first review of this novel! I've really enjoyed reading so far. Now, let's get into it, shall we? We're thrown head-first into action ...

Jane Dawn in collaboration with @Ley, @Spearmint, @ThePatchworkPilgrims Jane found her time with Jocelyn incrediably fascinating. Humans were all quite different, with varying opinions regarding thing

Hello fellow writer! This was such a touching and beautiful story. I absolutely loved the similes you used to describe things. The wind traveled like a snake... Yes, the descriptions ...

James blinked slow and hard, muttering something unintelligible before he turned his attention to the star in his hands, looked back up at Mel, then hesitantly sat down in the ...

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! Merci meaning: Thank you in French. Merci you stood by my side, Merci you are with me every day ...

"NO!!!" Eden screamed...

Jarid is excited to go home and visit Shadow but trouble may be brewing as the commander of Dragon Rider Academy discovers his connection to Smolder.

Is this how you do this? Eh. Anyways, hellooo! Not new, but I was only here for a short while before I left for a few years. Forgot my password. ...

I can't really say this is touching. I kinda felt nothing while reading this, sorry. But I will say you caught my attention, and that doesn't happen often. I was ...

Hello, Inferno, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I saw your request for a review on this poem, and thought I'd drop by. I love this poem's rhythm. ...

Birdcalls Into the Void Pancakes? Where did the pancakes come in? The scenery in my head went WOOOSH YOU THOUGHT. The image flipped! I was nice and comfy with the ...

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