Hi ShallowHouse! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. Let me start this by saying I absolutely loved this story! It's well written and I ...

Hello! Quill here to write a short review! *Takes out inkwell* first thoughts So immediately I am intrigued because this feels sort of like a poem but in prose format, ...

Hey Omni! I'm back to finish what's available to review in this story, which I think is satisfying for a Review Day ^^ Also, as of right now, all of ...

Hey, Wilson! It's me again! Sorry for the late review, I was so busy in life and could only read this now! Normally, I wouldn't read a single chapter with ...

Hey! Good morning/afternoon/evening ! Let's begin, shall we? First, I was a bit confused with the stylistic choice of having the ringmaster's dialogue be bold. Doing this pulls one's eyes ...

Hello! Quill here for a quick review! first thoughts , I don't know this book, (although this makes me want to read it) so It's hard to judge the meaning ...

Hey yamatri! Good morning/afternoon/evening! First let's start with- GLOWS The sky is burnt The red stained street Snowflake of ash scorched my skin This is a lovely stanza. Starting with ...

Hey Omni! Reporting for reviewing duty on behalf of Team Clever Elves for this Review Day ^^ I stopped after 0.5 and I did read 0.6, though I wasn’t sure ...

Hey there vampricone, happy Review Day! I'm going to be giving a more general review for this particular post because it's so long that I don't think I can go ...

Hi Omni! I don't know what of this I've already read (definitely some, probably not all) but it's Review Day and so review I shall! Sorry if I make reference ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, there is a lot to like about this chapter! I think my favorite element was your ...

Ok I'm not going to repeat my comments about this scene in general from the last part because you don't need to hear it twice so I'm just going to ...

Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

Happy Review Day! Sorry this has taken me so long, but if you're doing a revamp at least it can be a little while before I disappoint you again with ...

Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...