Hello Otterpop and welcome to YWS :D I hope you will have a good time here with us ;)

Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D My little list of typos: He has chosen th path of a medicine cat. "A kit will be born that shall hold ...

Not sure exactly what I'll put here eventually, but I do often create artworks related to my stories and I'm always looking to improve, especially as it pertains to people ...

Hi cidrianwritersguild, Mailice here with a short review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll try to focus more on structure and such before giving a short opinion on ...

Riverpaw meets with StarClan.

Hullo all! Shiki's Strings & Small Things is open for submissions.

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A normal day at school turns into one of mystery when Blake spots something dark causing trouble.

Greetings! I present to you another review! And would ya look at that? Another section from you in the Green Room! There was less detail in this compared to the ...

Greetings! I present to you a review! As an individual who writes fantasy also, I enjoy seeing writers produce details, both vivid and otherwise, into their works. You make great ...

I've encountered plenty of prologues to stories where they will be two pages long, or even 10! And this prologue is but a paragraph of information. And I believe that ...

@Yoshikrab, If you haven’t yet made the white king, I can do it.

Ahoy Forever! Some of the images in this stood out neatly. In particular, ones that made me wonder, or elicited a visceral response, were, Sometimes, by our oral weapons / ...

Hullo! In brief: -- Nice hook (end-of-world) -- Character set up -- tension between "insane" Lewis and Ansel, Lewis's need, Ansel's ambivalence -- Like the use of imagery, balanced description, ...

That was brilliantly honest. I don't know what's going on in detail, but your intensity, the depth to which you feel and care, and your ear for catching and writing ...

Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed your piece has been in the Green Room for a while, so I thought I'd bump it out! I've only skimmed ...