Hey yamatri! Good morning/afternoon/evening! First let's start with- GLOWS The sky is burnt The red stained street Snowflake of ash scorched my skin This is a lovely stanza. Starting with ...

Hey Omni! Reporting for reviewing duty on behalf of Team Clever Elves for this Review Day ^^ I stopped after 0.5 and I did read 0.6, though I wasn’t sure ...

Hey there vampricone, happy Review Day! I'm going to be giving a more general review for this particular post because it's so long that I don't think I can go ...

Hi Omni! I don't know what of this I've already read (definitely some, probably not all) but it's Review Day and so review I shall! Sorry if I make reference ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, there is a lot to like about this chapter! I think my favorite element was your ...

Ok I'm not going to repeat my comments about this scene in general from the last part because you don't need to hear it twice so I'm just going to ...

Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

Happy Review Day! Sorry this has taken me so long, but if you're doing a revamp at least it can be a little while before I disappoint you again with ...

Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! First things first, what a cliffhanger! I love how with every chapter, you continue to keep your readers on ...

Hello, and Happy Review Day! I'm not exactly surprised at how horribly their first interaction went, but I must admit, I am disappointed in Jacks conduct here. If he's going ...

This dialogue is very nicely written, many phrases sound very poetic and add a loving but also conservative aura to the text. The way they both talk in 3rd person ...

I like The Jungle book and this fanfic is amazing! It seems like Amaya and Nassir are going to be great friends. Hopefully they’ll be alright, but who knows? This ...

hello!! this is a very beautiful poem. you described growth so well, the idea of striving for a better life, then realizing that YOU have to give yourself that life, ...

This poem was very inspiring but also deep. It hits very hard as you compared positive beautiful things like snowflakes whom we have grown fond of and associate with the ...