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The Persona
by Flumadiddle in Poetry » General


Hands
by Lake in Poetry » Literature


Our Society of Ridicule
by VegasLights in Poetry » General


when will you believe it for yourself?
by soundofmind in Poetry » General


It Was The Color Of Your Hair
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    When The Quiet Girl Stands Up

    Hi, I know this is a very late review, but I couldn't not write one. This is honestly such a raw and heartfelt poem. I've also been suffering from things ...

    Capa002
    Capa002 - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Spiritual, General
    Azarel

    Hi Lizzie! Danni here for a quick review! I really sympathize with Naomi. She reminds me of myself - clever, sassy, speaks her mind. She doesn't deserve a brat for ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 15 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Thunderfleece: Chapter 0 – Padlocked Pandemonium

    Salutations, Tort! This is not only my first review of the year, but also my first review this vacation. Scandalous, I know, but at least I'm finally writing one! Hopefully ...

    BrumalHunter
    BrumalHunter - 1 hour ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Hello! I'm belvedere.

    Welcome back belv! I was wondering whether you might be a previous member returning from your excellent reviews. It's wonderful to have you back on site again. I love words ...

    Wisteria
    Wisteria - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Horror
    ​Mad Miser McCray

    Hi. Your poem was really nicely structured i think. it had a nice flow to it and a bit of a plot or story. I'm kind of not sure what ...

    lolosboing
    lolosboing - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Blake And Emma Chapter Two

    Hi! Danni here for a review! First off, LOVE the oblivious dad. Easily the best part in the story. Props to you! OK, nitpicks: minuet That should be minute. I ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    ​Chapter one dream boy

    Thanks for sharing this introduction to a Novel. I liked the way that mystery ad suspense are created by having the MC being awakened in mid sleep. Also how the ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Something More, Something Unique Chapter 11.1

    Hi, Flumadiddle. Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. As usual, I'll put small grammar/expression changes in blue . I'm probably not going to comment on punctuation ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 4 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Give me you wand and will guess your personality

    That really does sound like me, thanks DauntlessDagger! I'll admit I did get Pukwudgie rather than Thunderbird on Pottermore, but as with Gryffindor/Hufflepuff, I've always felt like both could fit.

    belvedere
    belvedere - 5 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda by Becky Albertalli

    Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda [Spoiler alert!] I will be honest with y'all. I've read this book three times. I originally found it in the teen section of my ...

    Evander
    Evander - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Off Court - 10.2

    Hi Bisc! Danni here for a review! Yay, time for the next chapter! First off, SO glad they sorted it out between them. They are such a cute couple together. ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Mage and the Immortal Chapter 14.1

    Alright, I'm back. I saw your wall post, but I thought I'd go ahead and review these anyway since I put in the work to read the rest of the ...

    Mea
    Mea - 5 hours ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Welcome New Members! [3]

    @Smolginger Welcome to YWS!

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 6 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Mighty Metro Monitors DT

    @ajruby12 That answers that! Well, I totally can write an intro post for the guy. Should be good practice to see how much I need to get on board with ...

    Tortwag
    Tortwag - 7 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Ellie's Beatles Song Contest

    Thank you, Elinor! I loved this contest idea and you were an awesome host!

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    Hiya! Temptress here! So, the first thing that came to my mind when I read this was "Self Harm" especially after I read the words "Metal," "Line," And "Blood beads" ...

    Temptress
    Temptress - 10 hours ago


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