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This is How I Know You Are Straight
by Audy in Poetry » Dramatic


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by Aley in Poetry » General


Moonlight: Chapter One
by Danni88 in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


the anatomy of fear
by Apricity in Poetry » Realistic


Midnight Hippos, the rise of slice Chapter one V1 (feedback please)
by CorvusQueen in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Mabel's Gardens

    A girl would do anything to save her sister from dying.

    Lumos
    Lumos - 2 minutes ago
    12+

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Romantic, Narrative
    What I'm looking for in a girl

    Hey there, welcome to my last review of the night in a desperate attempt to cling onto my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P As a prose ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy
    Dwarves of Pompeii

    I love the story, but I found paragraph ten to be a bit... odd. "The furnace thundered again and red-liquid burst from the mountain. It splashed down the ground around ...

    CorvusQueen
    CorvusQueen - 12 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Love And Hate

    Hey there Thisislegacy! Tom here, I'll be leaving you a review. I'll be leaving a short review mostly sticking to the guidelines of your author's note as requested. In terms ...

    SynonymousTom
    SynonymousTom - 18 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Politics, Culture
    You Are A Slave

    Hey there, Werthan. You get the honour of being the last review I do today in an attempt to reclaim my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 21 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Other » Other, Action / Adventure
    Tiko

    hi, I am not a good reviewer, but you followed me so I guess I will help you. the first paragraph seems like an info dump. if this is that ...

    CorvusQueen
    CorvusQueen - 40 minutes ago

  • Forums » Writing Tips
    Converting thoughts to poem

    So far most of my inspiration has been emotional. There has been some event/image inspired, but those are emotionally based as well for the most part. I'll try out your ...

    SynonymousTom
    SynonymousTom - 45 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Diseased (Ch. 1)

    I like how in the first part of the chapter you kind of foreshadow events in the future. It keeps the reader thinking as they read on from the beginning ...

    Skywind555
    Skywind555 - 46 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Animorphers DT

    Thank you @Sheyren!

    Wolfical
    Wolfical - 50 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic
    Breaking the Ice: Prologue

    hi! I am not very good at reviewing but I will try. (also I have people looking for the next chapter that I can't afford to post, soooooo) first of ...

    CorvusQueen
    CorvusQueen - 55 minutes ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Chapter 2 - Academy Year 1 - First Day / Chapter 3 - Academy Year 1 - Talentless?! / Chapter 4 - Academy Year 1 - Weakling

    The very "beginning" of the story. Kai goes to the Academy.

    Skywind555
    Skywind555 - 59 minutes ago
    18+ Language Violence Mature Content

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Love And Hate

    Hey there, you get the joy of being the green room review I do to try and reclaim my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P First things ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 1 hour ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10

    In which we meet Redway and his right-hand man.

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 2 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Love And Hate

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    Thisislegacy
    Thisislegacy - 2 hours ago
    12+

  • Forums » Art & Photography
    Banners!

    Hi! Is there any way that you could make my banner the name of my current novel? I want the text to say Love Through the Bars by Sheadun with ...

    Sheadun
    Sheadun - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic
    Breaking the Ice: Prologue

    Hey there Anico146, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review LINE-BY-LINE REVEIW/NIT-PICKS: I looked out the window in the grief counselor’s office of Northstorm High. It was on the second ...

    myjaspercat
    myjaspercat - 2 hours ago


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