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Re: Pearls : Chapter 1 - The Song
by AliceinBluue in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Re: Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea
by ShadowVyper in Novel / Chapter » Romantic


Re: my demon
by wendylau98 in Poetry » Realistic


Re: Chapter 15 of Princess of the Sea
by ShadowVyper in Novel / Chapter » Romantic


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by ShadowVyper in Novel / Chapter » Romantic


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Pearls : Chapter 1 - The Song

    Hey-o! Alice here stopping by for a review on yet another wonderful review day! First up, what I liked about your story! So I like the idea you have going ...

    AliceinBluue
    AliceinBluue - 2 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back for the final review for this novel, since this is the furthest chapter you've posted so far. Just wanted to take a moment at the beginning ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    my demon

    Neptune. As demon devoures on every waking hour. I may not truly understands it. But I know stories of it Okay, away the dark. Here for a quick review. In ...

    wendylau98
    wendylau98 - 12 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 15 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back yet again. Are you getting tired of me yet? ;) This looks like another fairly short chapter, so I'll jump in and see what I can ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 26 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 14 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady here for the next chapter! I'm starting to run out of reviewing steam, but I'll do my best to keep at it until I get through all ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 44 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review for you. Let's get started... Captain Swordfish ran up onto the deck, eating a swordfish sandwich for breakfast. Hm. I feel like you ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 54 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic
    Life Without Regrets [Chapter Five]

    Hey there Kanome! here for a quick review. Hope it will be, so let's see what Ledan and Jay are up too... getting on the floor on his knees. I ...

    wendylau98
    wendylau98 - 57 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    General Behind Me #3 Her sister

    Hello. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day and we are on the same review team. Go Team Red! Anyways, I don't see any errors that need ...

    Kanome
    Kanome - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 28

    Hello marms!:) I'm sorry this took me so long. This is going to be a quick review because I don't really have much to say this chapter. Let's dive in. ...

    EternalRain
    EternalRain - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 12 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review! I think you're familiar with my style at this point, so I'll jump straight in... Silira slammed the latch shut on the last ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction
    Neil Dreams of the Sky

    Hello. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. I love the use of Armstrong's point of view. It brings the reader close to him of how he ...

    Kanome
    Kanome - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction
    Neil Dreams of the Sky

    Hey there~ Here for a quick review. Well, hoping it will be quick. So, let's see about Neil then. Firstly, still the stuff of science fiction. There is no error ...

    wendylau98
    wendylau98 - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror
    Journey to oasis #1 (ideas for first book title?)

    Hello. Kanome here with a helpful review in honor of Review Day. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: There were a few errors in your story that I will like ...

    Kanome
    Kanome - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Chapter 11 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review, as promised heavily implied ;) I'll just jump straight into the review, since you should have a pretty good idea of what to ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Hikikomori

    Hello. Kanome here with a helpful review in honor of Review Day. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: laying on the floor emotions nonexistent door shut window too eyes glued ...

    Kanome
    Kanome - 2 hours ago


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