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  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    walk away; recover

    Hi there Lumi. This is Kays here delving in for another review during Review Week on this lovely Sunday night. I am a simple girl. I see Lumipoem, I click. ...

    Kays
    Kays - 12 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction
    The Light Maiden's mark, Chapter 8 - Unfortunate Realities

    Hey there, AneiDoru, I'm here for a quick review. :D The first paragraph was a good 'what previously happened' summary to keep the reader up to date. It didn't feel ...

    Dracula
    Dracula - 14 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    a part of me died

    Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! I have a deadly headache, so don't expect a well-developed review from me, haha. Anyways, here's a quick but maybe somewhat helpful ...

    Sheytato
    Sheytato - 16 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Storybook Workshop

    I'd love to, but I have school during that time.

    Feltrix
    Feltrix - 20 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Five

    Can I just say - I love the dialogue between Naomi and Dr. Sullivan. Their whole conversation. It starts off with Naomi all frightened and nervous while the doctor is ...

    rosette
    rosette - 24 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    walk away; recover

    What I see in this poem is that it is a poem written to the self about individuality. It is saying, in essence, that because we all come from the ...

    Aley
    Aley - 33 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    She Said

    Hey there Dracula, here to leave a few thoughts on your piece. I like that you're tackling a tough subject in this piece. Dieting, eating disorders, waste, and health can ...

    alliyah
    alliyah - 44 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 22

    Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 40 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! HA. MY PREDICTION WAS CORRECT. THEIR FATHER IS A WEREWOLF. I STARTED THINKING THAT ...

    PastelSlushie
    PastelSlushie - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    walk away; recover

    Heyo heyo! I'm on a reviewing spree! So first off this "you are broken in the mourning," should be morning, otherwise the wording needs a change, example "you are broken ...

    WyvrynScribe
    WyvrynScribe - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Curse of the Phoenix [DT]

    I'm afraid that Nal would not be a proper candidate for that particular setting. @Sheytato is well aware of the history I have planned.

    XxXTheSwordsmanXxX
    XxXTheSwordsmanXxX - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Nervous Bones

    Ello. Time for a review! Yay! So I like the overall feel, I'd try to get the flow more to be consistent with the stanza length. We are both hesitant ...

    WyvrynScribe
    WyvrynScribe - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Nervous Bones

    Kays, I haven't considered your poetry in a long time. But your stream of consciousness is an engaging meander. Let's talk about that. Unlike most streams of consciousness, you actually ...

    Lumi
    Lumi - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Conics Unfortunately: 32

    “Good,” she whispered. “Just say what I tell you to say, and remember if the officer asks anything beyond what I taught you, I will accuse them of harassment.” "How ...

    TheSilverFox
    TheSilverFox - 2 hours ago

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    walk away; recover

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    Lumi
    Lumi - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Defenders of the Dust City DT

    This storybook is really unique and kind of awesome! I may claim character depending on how the next few days go

    HazelGrace16
    HazelGrace16 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Historical Fiction, Narrative
    Calmotides: Heart of the Ocean

    Heyo! Let me first say that I find the overall story great and you are going in the right direction, but as always things can and will get better. Only ...

    WyvrynScribe
    WyvrynScribe - 2 hours ago


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