Hi there Istellur! Lim here to review your poem. First Impressions This is quite a mysterious piece. It feels dark and gloomy. The lines are very cryptic, for example, it’s ...

In which Charax discusses the tuzshu

I don't have a direct idea of where it goes from here in detail. I thought that now, after this first test, we are heading for a first mission, where ...

The canon characters have arrived! Meet Olive and Maps, two of the characters from the Gotham Academy series. Olive is actually the protagonist, but Maps is a fan favorite who's ...

Basic idea: scrapping the 'hard' magic system from my previous attempt to write this poetry collection. This new version will involve people being able to travel to different parts of ...

I'd like to join as a Bard and Sage please!

PAW prompt: "soup". Somebody enjoys a cream of mushroom soup, but their tablemate is not nearly so enthused. Not too happy with the final two lines ha

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Your title reminds me of that one book about whales floating in the sky, I don't remember exactly the title was, but I found the surreal amazing awesome due to ...

Wow! I didn’t expect that twist! What ever happened to Myria’s dear mother? I believe the title should be “Familiar Faces” because one would know who their mother is, but ...

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Hello everybody! I'm new here and everyone has been so kind and welcoming. It's great motivation for writing. I just have a problem reviewing works haha because I read loads ...

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