Congratulations!! You definitely deserve it, @chikara!

The first thing that struck me about this piece was how accurately it portrays grief. The subject seems very close to heart for you and Rebecca's emotional progress is so ...

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A dream I had

Wow...I should have waited longer and then I'd have more to read!! I can't believe I'm already on the last one :( Ren still seemed pissed about the entire heist—likely ...

Ooh okay there's a ton of cool ideas here!! Yeah, Raya's main human villain (Namaari) was reformed, and I'd like to keep her that way. (She's a princess too, and ...

Hey there, hope you're having a fantastic day :D This is a very powerful short story. I could feel the emotion behind everything, and there was this swelling of sadness ...

Hi RandomTalks, Mailice here with a short review! :D Your first paragraph is wonderful. It's emotionally charged, intense and has a very good shift between sentence structure. It feels like ...

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Aloha! :D The clamps were still attacked at the end, and she vaguely wondered how she hadn’t seen him hide them within his clothes. I think you meant to say ...

I'm running out of ways to greet you...I feel like the good ol' "Back again" is getting overused :-P So Ren’s words had all been intentional. It wasn’t just misplaced ...

Hi Yoshikrab, Mailice here with a short review! :D Quick note on your post: the link didn't work for me. Maybe it works for others and I'm just a magnet ...

Back again!! For better or for worse... :-P His hand continued to twitch to his hip as though he would find it there. This is more of a personal opinion ...

Hello, here to leave a quick review! It was a good read, and you really bring out the character of your protagonist with your words. It was simple and short ...

Hey mordax! I'm back again and will be catching up on your book so be prepared to hear from me a lot! I finally have my laptop back so I ...

I can't begin to express how incredible this piece is. The notion of being limited by youth in a suffering world is such an original idea to write about. Additionally, ...